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galaxy84
Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 18
Pa, USA

0 posted 2000-04-24 08:39 PM


I made you my world
Loved you endlessly
You were my everything
In all my thoughts
Day and night
Dreams of you, me, us together
I hoped to spend my life with you
Then IT happened-
Why I still know not
You broke my heart
Tore it in two
I felt battered, broken,
Used
Useless without you
You stomped my world
Crushed my dreams
Killed my hopes
I'm so hurt
I resent you
I should hate you
But...
I can't
You were my first love
My last love
My only love
My heartbreak
And for the good times
The bad times
I will remember you
In my heart (loving you still, yet so hurt)
In my mind (lessons you taught me)
Always
I'll never forget
YOU

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Go0fYdUcK
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 28
CA
1 posted 2000-04-24 08:44 PM


wow..Hi galaxy! im new to Passions too! i really love your poem..really touching..i can tell that this would be teh one person u wont forget in quite a while...please post more of your poems cuz i enjoyed reading dem!

 *KhAnH-eLySe*

A Romantic Heart
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Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2000-04-24 08:57 PM


Galaxy welcome to passions....This was a good poem, I enjoyed the theme and I relate to it also! look forward to seeing more!
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since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!
3 posted 2000-04-24 09:00 PM


galaxy,
What a heartbreaking piece. I think alot of us here at passions will be able to relate to your pain.

Welcome to the family.

All my love,
Jeffrey

Irie
Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
4 posted 2000-04-24 09:31 PM


Welocme to Passions Galaxy....
What a heartfelt piece you have written here.



netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
5 posted 2000-04-24 09:41 PM


Welcome to Passions, Galaxy
Oh the pain in your beautiful poem.


netswan

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
6 posted 2000-04-24 10:27 PM


Welcome to the family! Your emotions are so clear here...please check your email for a special greeting..  
Lady Web
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96
Houston, Texas
7 posted 2000-04-24 10:42 PM


Welcome to passion I'm a newbie too. This is a love you'll always remember. You'll forget the bad times and just remember the love.
I still love my first love.

 

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Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
8 posted 2000-04-24 11:11 PM



If only we could hate them...would be much easier to get over them.  You have captured the hurt and the loss so well.  I hope you find the release that so many find here at Passions.  Welcome!! You have made a Grand entrance!


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


sweetchild
Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 37

9 posted 2000-04-25 06:45 AM


Hey! I'm new 2, (except I didn't write such a touching poem for my first post! Oh well,)
Anywaz, good job and welcome to Passions.  

galaxy84
Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 18
Pa, USA
10 posted 2000-04-25 05:03 PM


thank you all for the comments. i am gald u all like the poem. it came straight from my heart. i hope my others are good also. please read them and comment. thank u all once again.

galaxy84

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