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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
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Idaho

0 posted 2000-04-24 08:27 PM


Stinking Blooze

Wandering through my
head took me back to our last appearance
as I was directed mostly by the crowded times and
audience my lead vocalist lost her voice in our first set I
had to beg her “please” sit this one out not more than
twenty minutes later her backup lost hers too
about that time I’m beginning to
wonder if someone has
cast some voodoo
finally to much
whooping and hollering
the great “Waz” (John Wasiloski)
asked trolling over bass Vio strings “what we
gonna do now..?” I knew there was nothing left to
do there we were in the middle of it all in the hottest
club around I looked at him and murmured a low
refrain “I’m gonna play the stinkin’ blooze”
I played a few things everybody knew
and somehow we made it
through and with a
simple I might
as well be dead/but
I could kill ya all instead
bowed and bleed out a thank
kyou and I was gone and though
there was an encore I wasn’t able
to return the trip home was silent
and blank now here it is three
years later and of all things
I’m here to play more
stinking blooze
deja vu.

[Is there a need to see Part 3]


 

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-04-25 07:07 AM


Lucky~
Play me the blooze !
I like.
~*Marge*~


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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2000-04-25 09:57 AM


A memorable evening for sure, and another little flicker
Liz

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

3 posted 2000-04-25 10:28 AM


That's always been my philosopy as well...when all else fails, there's always the blooze...tried and true.  

Oh, and about part three...if there's a need to write it, there's a need to read it.

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
4 posted 2000-04-25 06:06 PM


Marge,

No wonder you and Rosemary find a kinship with each other. Ya all's the blooze sisters. So ya all must be born with soul. I can never pick up the darn thing without having at least played a half hour medley of Blooze for her. Little stinker, never seen anything like it, rocks her soul.

Liz,

Rosemary has just resently started to think of recording my stuff, especially after mentioning the dreaded arthritis blooze.

Claire,

Now your sounding like Rosemary too... Dale , Dale... Play me the blooze

Part Three... are you kiddddding. There's a book (journal) After this I'll have to check for other exciting melodramas.

Thank you all so much..!!!!!

Martie
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5 posted 2000-04-25 06:36 PM


lucky, if it's the blooze you play, I want to hear it too!
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
6 posted 2000-04-25 07:38 PM


Ah, baby, your blues rock my socks!  And what a night that was!


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