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March 9th, 2000
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March 9th, 2000 |
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Go0fYdUcK Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 28CA |
March 9, 2000 I hate how your hair sticks everywhere I hate how you always run out of gel I hate when you laff that annoying laff I hate when your sight rings my bell I hate your sillie personality I hate your damn goofy smile I hate how I have to ask myself why Why do I love your dorkie style I hate how you flirt with me Without feeling more than a friend I hate how you confuse me My brain and heart cannot be mend I hate how you like red starbursts And how you are a big stud I hate how you pick me up And threaten to throw me in the mud I hate those themos pants dat u wear How dey make my heart collapse and die I hate dat skateboard u always carry How it makes you look so fly I hate how you want our b-ball court Cuz the sun was killing your air pass I hate that dumb old club Dat always keeps you out of class I hate when I have starburst Cuz that's only when you'd talk to me Well trust me on this boy, Your trust on Starburst is deceased I hate the way you kill my stomach Whenever you smile at me I hate how you won't give me a chance How that makes my tears overflow the sea I hate when your eyes lock with mine Displaying me your soul I hate how it makes me realize How impossible it is 4 me to take back That beating heart of mine you stole... |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Oh Goofy -- how totally original, and creative, and such a myriad of emotions Great First Post Will be keeping an eye out for more Welcome to Passions netswan |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I hate how I loved reading this poem so much I hate how you found our family, great luck I hate how I want to read more of you stuff. Welcome to passions. Parker |
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Go0fYdUcK Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 28CA |
hahah..Thanx you guys...GREAT FAMILY WE GOT HERE eh? *KhAnH-eLySe* |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I hate how all I can think to say is: Welcome to passions. Jeffrey |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi GoOfYdUck, Well I hate to say it but this is a great poem, enjoyed very much and welcome to passions. Cerenity |
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galaxy84 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 18Pa, USA |
very original. i like it and will be looking for ur next one. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I hate how to say...Welcome to passions...and loved your form...look forward to more!!  |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
I Hate that feeling that you have so creatively writen!  Welcome to Passions ~Sheri |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I hate how I have to tell you to check your email for a message....  |
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Go0fYdUcK Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 28CA |
I hate how kind you guys are! *KhAnH-eLySe* |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey Goof~ Welcome to passions you'll just hate it here hate how you just have to keep posting, hate how you don't have enough time to spend reading and replying, hate how everyone is so special and the list goes on...Seriously this place ROCKS and you'll truly LURVvv it here.Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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