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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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0 posted 2000-04-24 08:05 PM


Laughter lives on
within the flame
appreciate
that when our mouths open
our lips part with smiles
our eyes light up
with wonder
partly love for you
sense of humour
the joy
so when you laugh
remember it is so magical
it makes me smile

We can all laugh
no use being a model
no need to be thin
all we need
is what we have
a mouth
and eyes
that shine so very much

Take my heart
imagine my smile
and laugh with me
as I laugh with you
the same way
that I love you

Magical dreams
await us all...
hand on face
head on pillow
drifting...believing
love
makes us laugh
till we cry...

This heart rests in your care




[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 04-24-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
brandondinsmore
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1 posted 2000-04-24 08:07 PM


Great words, great poem, great name, and for yourself.  You care.
Balladeer
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2 posted 2000-04-24 08:08 PM


In my care, your heart is safe, dear Rainbow. I'm saving up all my smiles and silliness to share with you when you return. God bless....
Parker
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3 posted 2000-04-24 08:30 PM


RainbowGirl, i like this much, and these line tell the truth of what we see in your little pic. They so shine..... Parker

all we need
is what we have
a mouth
and eyes
that shine so very much

Denise
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4 posted 2000-04-24 10:14 PM


You'll be in my heart and prayers, Cindy. ((((HUGS))))

Denise

Lady Web
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5 posted 2000-04-24 10:29 PM


nice dream poem. i like it.


~Melissa

Poet deVine
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6 posted 2000-04-24 10:29 PM


We'll be here! Waiting for the beautiful glow of your smile...
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7 posted 2000-04-25 06:59 AM


RainbowGirl~
There is magic in your smile
and it spreads to my heart.
Prayers to lift your spirits high.
Love you
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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8 posted 2000-04-25 10:12 AM


Have plenty of smiles waiting for you, RG .....
Praying here ....
HUSG
Love You Loads

Sunshine
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9 posted 2000-04-25 01:46 PM


your heart, forev'r more safe, in mine hands...
TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
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Louisville, Mississippi, USA
10 posted 2000-04-25 01:47 PM


Rainbow,
     You always make me smile! And I have more where that one came from!

            

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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11 posted 2000-04-25 01:53 PM


Rainbow,
You have made me smile
Liz

Martie
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12 posted 2000-04-25 02:27 PM


Rainbow, laughter is magical!  I love the possitive feel of this poem.  Hugs!
Danny Holloway
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13 posted 2000-04-25 02:28 PM


~~~~~very nice~~~~those magical dreams~~~~~
cjs9853
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smyrna, tn usa.
14 posted 2000-04-25 03:08 PM


Beautiful, So glad you are back   And i will take your heart and laugh with you
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