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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-04-24 06:20 PM


In my darkest hour
Of solitary revelry
The time alone
Helps me to be free
The years are all misty
Now that you are here
And living without you
Is the only thing I fear
I am all that I am
Because you took my hand
Without your love
I alone, cannot stand



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vandana
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1 posted 2000-04-24 06:24 PM


Nice poem ~smiles~
Corinne
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2 posted 2000-04-24 06:42 PM


Yes you can, James, yes you can.

Corinne

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-04-24 07:50 PM


Now that you are here
And living without you
Is the only thing I fear
I am all that I am
Because you took my hand
Without your love
I alone, cannot stand
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perfect Jer,...its like you read my mind(smile)...
so much emotion and devotion spoke in a few
perfect words...nothing more needs to be said.
except perhaps-- your timing is as perfect as this poem.  
your jm


 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
4 posted 2000-04-24 07:55 PM


JML* This is so beautiful, the all consuming love that makes you feel as if you can't live without it...the only way to love JML the only way, because in the end you know if you lost it....you would go on because there is no other choice.

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2000-04-24 07:58 PM


JML,
Good thoughts, good words, good poem.

galaxy84
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since 2000-04-24
Posts 18
Pa, USA
6 posted 2000-04-24 08:59 PM


JML,
my thoughts exactly. wonderful poem
                
                  galaxy84

Jeffrey Carter
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since 2000-04-08
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7 posted 2000-04-24 09:03 PM


Perfect description of true love.

All my love,
jeffrey

tulip
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since 1999-07-04
Posts 320
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8 posted 2000-04-24 09:30 PM


Wow,
I hope I'm able to find someone one day, that feels that way about me!!!

Sven
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9 posted 2000-04-24 09:46 PM


JML,
    this is indeed an excellent poem, you have found a love that is all consuming. . .such is the way of love. . .and I see that you have found it. . .

Wonderful poem my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Lady Web
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since 2000-04-12
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10 posted 2000-04-24 10:09 PM


Words of love so sweet. NIcely expressed.

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