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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-04-24 06:12 PM


Sitting here alone
Hand on the phone
Memories flood back
Wow I'd lost track

Of what year
It is getting clear
Long long time ago
As you well know

Sat here once before
Inside that door
Listening to you
Our love so true

We were so in love
You fit me like a glove
Who could've knew
I had no clue

Love would turn to hate
On another date
Many years had passed
Thought it would last

Why did it fail
Become so stale
You'll know why
Before the final good-bye




 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved
brandondinsmore
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 142
OKC, OK
1 posted 2000-04-24 07:19 PM


Good job.  Expand please.
Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
2 posted 2000-04-24 09:09 PM


A poignant post, my friend.

Corinne

WolfsMate
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 121
New York
3 posted 2000-04-25 02:26 PM


I can well relate to this. Wonderful verse!

 "You never have to worry...Never fear for I am near"

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
4 posted 2000-04-25 02:45 PM


LW, enjoyed your poem, though it feels like there's some sadness within.
~~nice writing~~~

Lone Wolf
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Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-04-25 10:30 PM


brandon....thanks.  Expand how??

Corinne....yes it is.  Thank you, my friend.

WolfsMate....Sorry you relate and thanks!!

Danny....Glad you enjoyed it.  Guess it is bittersweet in a way.  Feel sad these days.  



 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
6 posted 2000-04-26 12:52 PM


If people could know there wouldn't be
so many tales of woe, or divorces for
that matter.

Lone Wolf -- this is great ---
I like the way you wrote this

netswan

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