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Enthusiasm flickered" [part 1]
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Enthusiasm flickered" [part 1] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Enthusiasm flickered < !signature-->enthusiasm hasn’t flickered much sense the daz of yor I think I’m going to dare the untold feat of performing an entire unrehearsed medley verbatim planning a surprise the band surprise the people even surprise myself craze common alternatives drifted in framing the floors in flashy sieved setups stragglers filtered through the two balconies I sit in an upper booth offstage loft high above the wondering eyes debating just late enough to work up a charge of expectation as if I needed it all that was needed now is the crowd and the fuse would be lit and I’d be off in a lash and they’d be part of it my lead vocalist’s cigarette quivers to a spiritual rogued rhythm journey of its own stuck between her two fingers she’s anxious looking over my guitar she wonders what I’ve got stashed up this satin sleeve of mine as a vocalist myself I was no slouch and one could never know what would happen when I opened my capacious mouth and I never cared or thought to think of guts or ruts or we would have never made it thus. [Part 2 coming soon] [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-24-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I always find your writing interesting, Lucky...(looking forward to part2) I enjoyed the way you've written this scene. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Truly, you belong among some sort of higher level writers...songwriters maybe. I enjoy your writing and am not going to pretend to get some idden meaning out of it, because I like it that much. I am pleased to see the things you write with such ease and skill, Lucky. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
brandondinsmore Honestly I was waiting to see what kind of RE:'s I'd get on this as it truely comes from my journals. Times were, to say the least.., strange in those years. Meadowmuse Your kindo interesting yourself, I thank you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ I think your journey of enthusiasm flickers yet. Thanks for sharing ... I go now to part II. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you for the flickers, as they reveal bits and pieces and fragments of a life and of the mind Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Found it!! interesting. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I think your enthusiasm flickers non-stop! Hey, honey, would you get out your guitar?? Please??! |
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