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Starving...short poem

Cutie Putootie
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since 2000-01-20

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Ohio

0 posted 2000-04-24 04:57 PM

Step closer
Closer and I'll devour you
Soak up all your affection
Into my soul

Hurry, before
My heart freezes
And I wither
Then fall to bits
Starving for you

Blondie
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since 1999-08-06

Posts 307
Ohio

1 posted 2000-04-24 05:09 PM

WOW! This is great! Is this one of your old poems that you used to write to your hubby???

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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2 posted 2000-04-24 05:12 PM

Aha...short but sweet. James

Balladeer

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3 posted 2000-04-24 05:13 PM

Whew! Short...but powerful. Excellent writing, cutie.

Cutie Putootie
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4 posted 2000-04-24 05:50 PM

Thank you so much for the replies, it is short but I hope it gets the point across.

Denise

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5 posted 2000-04-24 10:11 PM

You have succeeded, Cutie! Great job!

Denise

Cutie Putootie
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6 posted 2000-04-24 10:35 PM

pen of passion
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7 posted 2000-04-25 12:20 PM

I won't digress, A short passionate KICK.

netswan
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8 posted 2000-04-25 12:29 PM

Amazing - this is well done

netswan

Jeffrey Carter

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9 posted 2000-04-25 12:37 PM

Wow!!!
simply Wow!!!

All my love,
Jeffrey

Cutie Putootie
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10 posted 2000-04-25 06:35 AM

Thanks guys!

Blondie
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since 1999-08-06

Posts 307
Ohio

11 posted 2000-04-25 02:47 PM

I'm hungry...

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