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My heart feels
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My heart feels |
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sweetchild Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 37 |
I was told always to write from my heart, It's blooming with feelings, where do I start? I know that pen and paper will never do, As I try to express this feeling so new. My heart is light, My head heavy no more, And in this night, I feel I can SOAR! Captive released, I have broken free, Exultant now Unleashed from misery. There is no pain, My last, I have cried, Sorrows banished, Tears are dried. Blissful heaven, Ecstasy; This joy, this happiness Is growing in me. I know it will end, Though I'll die when it stops I pray, plea, BEG Let me never wake up. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is delightfully optimistic and upbeat and written with a strong rhythm...Wonderful. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
What a beautiful expression you have given us. Thank you for sharing this. All my love, Jeffrey |
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sweetchild Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 37 |
Claire and Jeffrey, Thank you both for your comments, I really value your words  *erika* |
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