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Puckie
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 5
London UK

0 posted 2000-04-24 01:13 PM



You are so beautiful to me….

Like sunlight glinting off dew dropped flowers,
Like a rainbow majestically painting the skies.
Like cool, clear stream babbling down a mountainside,
Like the first flower of spring,
And the first snow of winter.

Like evensong from a throng of songbirds,
Like the fairies that skip through foot of the garden,
Like the scent of a rose on a warm summer breeze,
Like the taste of a kiss drenched in love
And the love of the one you kiss.

Like the smell of your lover fresh from the bath,
Like the touch of their skin warm against yours,
Like the look in their eyes when they smile
Like warm caring hugs when you are blue
And the way that you laugh when you are truly happy.

Like way that I love you with all of my heart,
Like the dreams that I have of our life,
Like the thoughts that I have when I think of you,
Like the feel of new life you’ve given me
And the love you give to me.


I love you…..





 

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brandondinsmore
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 142
OKC, OK
1 posted 2000-04-24 01:15 PM


Indeed.  You write such true words, I sense.
netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
2 posted 2000-04-24 01:37 PM


Puckie this is so lovely and well
written -----sigh ----

netswan

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-04-24 09:26 PM


Puckie~
This is very sincere and pretty.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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