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Open Poetry #7

mmm is this all cheese?

rene
Member

since 2000-04-24

Posts 113

0 posted 2000-04-24 01:00 PM

The light breaks through, and how she is!
     somewhere i am under seige
A thousand whispers in her kiss
     somewhere i am on my knees.

so strange to feel without a touch
    somewhere i am out of time
So hard to understand so much
             somewhere i become sublime

brandondinsmore
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 142
OKC, OK

1 posted 2000-04-24 01:02 PM

breathtaking...rene. I love this one. Please explain...

rene
Member

since 2000-04-24

Posts 113

2 posted 2000-04-24 01:29 PM

its about the total abstract feeling of awesome nothingness you feel when your idea of perfection is reflected in a person

sweetchild
Junior Member

since 2000-04-19

Posts 37

3 posted 2000-04-24 03:59 PM

Incredible poem, really inspiring.It must be truly amazing to feel all that!

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