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tracie66
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0 posted 04-24-2000 01:37 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Deep in the valley of my soul
Entwined in the jungle of my mind
Are thoughts of you, I find

Those thoughts are embedded deep inside my being
And it's you that I need by my side

Travel through my valley to reach the depth of my soul
Travel through my minds jungle to reach my source of gold
Because golden is my souls valley and my jungled mind
Send for me in the depth of my being and gold is what you'll find


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 04-24-2000 01:56 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tracie~
This is so pretty.
Sounds like there is indeed
a heart of gold to be found.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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2 posted 04-24-2000 02:09 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Marge~
My dear freind I note the time of your post, what the heck are you up so late for. Well I shouln't mind because you took the time to read my poem   thanks for your wonderful words Love Tracie It's 4pm here in Oz.


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Danny Holloway
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3 posted 04-24-2000 03:43 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I think finding you would be more precious than gold! This is expressive!
Nice writing tracie66
sweetchild
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4 posted 04-24-2000 03:55 PM       View Profile for sweetchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetchild

Whoever reachs that depth of your being will surely be plentifully blessed!
EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


5 posted 04-24-2000 05:44 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

"Deep in the valley of my soul
Entwined in the jungle of my mind
Are thoughts of you, I find"

Wow, all I can say is I like! These words really jumped out at me. Thankyou for sharing this work.



 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien
Poet deVine
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6 posted 04-24-2000 10:09 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sounds like the trip would be worth it...good poem!  
tracie66
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7 posted 04-25-2000 01:05 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Oh you are all such sweethearts, you made my day with all your beautiful comments...Thanks

Danny~
My dear friend you are worth your weight in GOLD and I thank-you for your reply  

Sweetchild~
Your words are so kind, many thanks  

EagleOne~
You are most welcome   I'm glad you liked this...Thanks


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Jeffrey Carter
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State of constant confusion!


8 posted 04-25-2000 01:17 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Heart of hearts
soul of souls
the depth of your being
is more precious than gold

even to a mind like mine
that heart of yours could surely blind
so i'll just say this poem i like
before i completely lose my mind


Did I just say that?....geeeze...lol

Great poem Tracie.

All my love,
Jeffrey
Janet Marie
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9 posted 04-25-2000 02:08 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

beautiful imagery in this...
very peaceful and serene read.
very nice work,
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


tracie66
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10 posted 04-26-2000 08:10 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

The devine miss poet~
I'm so sorry you must have snuck in there  
Thanks  sweetie for your kind words  
Tracie~

Oh Jeffrey you were making me blush  
and I loved every minute of it.
Seriously thanks for your beautiful poetic reply.
Tracie~

jm~
Thanks Hon you always say the sweetest things I'm so glad you liked it  
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


11 posted 04-26-2000 09:03 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Whoever reaches your heart will indeed strike gold....I only pray they are worthy of it! Lovely poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
netswan
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12 posted 04-26-2000 09:41 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Lovely, Tracie.  May a rainbow lead
down to the top of your head, so someone
doesn't miss the heart of gold of you.

netswan
Rex Allen McCoy
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13 posted 04-26-2000 09:56 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

beautifully written Tracie ... we all need a friend with a heart of gold ... to give ours the midas touch

Rex}>{{{{o>
mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind


14 posted 04-26-2000 02:03 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Very nice writing, indeed~
Your heart of gold is showing  
Marie~
Denise
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15 posted 04-26-2000 02:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Tracie! Well written!

Denise
tracie66
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16 posted 04-27-2000 04:54 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Lizzie~
Such kind loving words from you. Thanks
Tracie~

netswan~
What you wrote was absolutely beautiful, thank you
Tracie~

Rex
Love you  
Tracie

Mariee~
Thanks sweetie  
Tracie~

Denise~
Thanks so much for you reply
Tracie~




 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Sudhir Iyer
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17 posted 04-27-2000 05:35 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Reaching out, exploring the excavations of a human soul and finding that there is a heart of gold...

great imagery.

Really enjoyed it.
Sudhir

 Take each day as it comes,
Consider each day as a flight,
Try hard to succeed and fly,
Surely then you will reach some height.

But if by some chance you don’t,
Remember that tomorrow will always come.
Learn this well and learn this hard
That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun.

A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski
tracie66
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18 posted 04-28-2000 08:23 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Sudhir~
So glad you enjoyed it   thank you
Tracie~

Everyone has a heart of gold just some are harder to reach than others.


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Parker
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... the old black rum


19 posted 04-28-2000 10:44 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Gold, this is gold, very nice read.

Mining for a heart of Gold.

Parker
Cerenity
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20 posted 04-28-2000 09:59 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Tracie,

I am so glad I did not miss this, it is wonderful, I love the way you expressed yourself in this, very nice.

Cerenity
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


21 posted 04-28-2000 10:07 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

This poemis a treasure of GOLD, for someone with a heart of gold that shines!
tracie66
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22 posted 05-01-2000 06:42 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Parker~
Glad you liked my poem  
Tracie~

Cerenity1~
Such sweet words, so glad you read it and liked it  
Tracie~

Romantic Heart~
I think you are the one that shines  
thanks
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Kit McCallum
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23 posted 05-02-2000 07:15 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Beautiful imagery Tracie ... I feel like I've just been on a safari and found the treasure buried deep within.  Wonderfully written!

~Kit McCallum
tracie66
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24 posted 05-03-2000 05:32 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Kit~
Glad to take you on such a journey   Thanks for reading this.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


 
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