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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Deep in the valley of my soul Entwined in the jungle of my mind Are thoughts of you, I find Those thoughts are embedded deep inside my being And it's you that I need by my side Travel through my valley to reach the depth of my soul Travel through my minds jungle to reach my source of gold Because golden is my souls valley and my jungled mind Send for me in the depth of my being and gold is what you'll find Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ This is so pretty. Sounds like there is indeed a heart of gold to be found. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ My dear freind I note the time of your post, what the heck are you up so late for. Well I shouln't mind because you took the time to read my poem  thanks for your wonderful words Love Tracie It's 4pm here in Oz.Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I think finding you would be more precious than gold! This is expressive! Nice writing tracie66 |
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sweetchild Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 37 |
Whoever reachs that depth of your being will surely be plentifully blessed! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
"Deep in the valley of my soul Entwined in the jungle of my mind Are thoughts of you, I find" Wow, all I can say is I like! These words really jumped out at me. Thankyou for sharing this work. Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sounds like the trip would be worth it...good poem!  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh you are all such sweethearts, you made my day with all your beautiful comments...Thanks Danny~ My dear friend you are worth your weight in GOLD and I thank-you for your reply Sweetchild~ Your words are so kind, many thanks EagleOne~ You are most welcome I'm glad you liked this...ThanksKeep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Heart of hearts soul of souls the depth of your being is more precious than gold even to a mind like mine that heart of yours could surely blind so i'll just say this poem i like before i completely lose my mind Did I just say that?....geeeze...lol Great poem Tracie. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful imagery in this... very peaceful and serene read. very nice work, take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
The devine miss poet~ I'm so sorry you must have snuck in there  Thanks sweetie for your kind words Tracie~ Oh Jeffrey you were making me blush  and I loved every minute of it. Seriously thanks for your beautiful poetic reply. Tracie~ jm~ Thanks Hon you always say the sweetest things I'm so glad you liked it Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Whoever reaches your heart will indeed strike gold....I only pray they are worthy of it! Lovely poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lovely, Tracie. May a rainbow lead down to the top of your head, so someone doesn't miss the heart of gold of you. netswan |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
beautifully written Tracie ... we all need a friend with a heart of gold ... to give ours the midas touch Rex}>{{{{o> |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Very nice writing, indeed~ Your heart of gold is showing  Marie~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Tracie! Well written! Denise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lizzie~ Such kind loving words from you. Thanks Tracie~ netswan~ What you wrote was absolutely beautiful, thank you Tracie~ Rex Love you Tracie Mariee~ Thanks sweetie Tracie~ Denise~ Thanks so much for you reply Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Reaching out, exploring the excavations of a human soul and finding that there is a heart of gold... great imagery. Really enjoyed it. Sudhir Take each day as it comes, Consider each day as a flight, Try hard to succeed and fly, Surely then you will reach some height. But if by some chance you don’t, Remember that tomorrow will always come. Learn this well and learn this hard That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun. A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sudhir~ So glad you enjoyed it thank youTracie~ Everyone has a heart of gold just some are harder to reach than others. Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Gold, this is gold, very nice read. Mining for a heart of Gold. Parker |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Tracie, I am so glad I did not miss this, it is wonderful, I love the way you expressed yourself in this, very nice. Cerenity |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This poemis a treasure of GOLD, for someone with a heart of gold that shines! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Parker~ Glad you liked my poem Tracie~ Cerenity1~ Such sweet words, so glad you read it and liked it Tracie~ Romantic Heart~ I think you are the one that shines thanks Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful imagery Tracie ... I feel like I've just been on a safari and found the treasure buried deep within. Wonderfully written! ~Kit McCallum |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kit~ Glad to take you on such a journey Thanks for reading this.Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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FadingSun Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 76Southern California |
Tracie, I'm so glad I got to finally read one of your poems. I found this poem completely intense. You definitely brought passion to these words. ~S |
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FadingSun Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 76Southern California |
Tracie, As I was playing, I thought again of your poem. So again I read it. And again, I must tell you how beautiful it is. You are absolutely an amazing soul Tracie, and it's enchanting to witness the beauty of your heart speak as its woven with words. Always, ~S |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Tracie* This is spun with the golden thread of a heart and soul as pure as a new fallen snow. Showing that once the jungle is pushed through and the valley is crossed there is a treasure to behold within. Beautifully done Tracie, thank you for sharing this. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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daft Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 16 |
Beautiful poem & very well written! The one who travels those depths mmust be one lusky person to find one as special as you! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~tracie *applause* this was wonderful m'friend! i really liked how you captured the depth of your soul in this one. your words flow so well together with one another, that it makes the reader feel as though they are with you at that moment. thanks for sharing this! take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
My dear friend S~ So glad you read this your comments were so kind and I appreciate it...thanksTracie~ Sweet little butterflies~ You got it right thanks for your lovely replyTracie~ Daft~ Yep my hubby, he's the best although sometimes I don't know how he puts up with me thanks for reading.Tracie~ Amy~ My dear little friend, glad the journey was a wonderful one. Did you find that treasure thanks ever so much for your comments.Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Tuck Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 27 |
wonderful work! evokes many pictures in my mind...~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Tuck~ Glad to have evoked the pictures in your mind thanks so much for your replyTracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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