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The Poet's Pen (Sonnet-Repost for Balladeer)
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The Poet's Pen (Sonnet-Repost for Balladeer) |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
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This is the second sonnet that I wrote. Balladeer was the inspiration for it. Thanks for the inspiration, Balladeer! The poet nightly sits with pen in hand And contemplates the fleeting years of life The hourglass has nearly drained of sand Each grain within can tell a joy or strife. The labor’s long to give each one a name To wrest some wisdom from experience Too often phrases tend to play the same Old tired tunes from aging instruments. Undaunted by the fierceness of this fight The bard within refuses yet to die The struggle rages well into the night Impassioned soul screams loud the battle-cry. Another victory is sung again As honey flows forth from the poet’s pen. 11/99 [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 04-24-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
And you took to sonnets as a bee to honey... beautifully done. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Denise, you been peeking in my window at night?? hehe. To be any inspiration to you at all is a great reward but to be one for such a beautiful poem as this brings a warm smile to my face and gladness to my heart. I thank you, Denise. You are very special to me and to all of us. Whatever the inspiration, keep on writing! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Love sonnet, Denise! Corinne |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Denise these are your forte'! You do them so well! Great indeed m'lady! |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
You write so well I wish that I can write just as good as you do some day. At night is when I do tend to write the days experiences. Great reading |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Mike, Balladeer, Corinne, Rebecca and Lady Web for your gracious comments! Thanks again, Michael, for the inspiration! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ You write with inspiration from a man that I greatly admire also. You certainly did him justice. He is vigilant, is he not? A finely tuned sonnet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
well structered hehe coming from me is that a compliment? yuh very thougtful and well penned |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Marge and Walt for reading and for your lovely comments! Yes, he is the best of the best, isn't he? Denise |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Nice tribute and I think your sonnet form is fine. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks for reading and for your lovely reply, Rob! Denise |
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