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On Yellow
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On Yellow |
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Franni Junior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 39 |
On Yellow Yellow is primary, The burning center of our star, Sunlight on your head, Warmth to bones, Smiles. Yellow is golden, Like sunflowers laughing Along a Kansas highway Talking back to the sun. Yellow likes green. It etches bright the leaves Of ginger plants, Finds red to glorify a sunset. Yellow is subtle, Like in shafts of light After storm, In cream and tapioca pudding. Yellow is candle glow Recalling the feeling Of wearing yellow gingham And your first kiss. Yellow is silent. Is holy, Shining down through night shades From the moon. Franni [This message has been edited by Franni (edited 04-23-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Franni~ This is absolutely beautiful with the softness of the shades of yellow.  'Yellow is golden, Like sunflowers laughing Along a Kansas highway Talking back to the sun.' Perfect images of yellow. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Franni, what a wonderful, descriptive poem ....I love yellow! |
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Franni Junior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 39 |
Thank you Marge for the surprise picture of sunfowers and kind words... Appreciate your comments. |
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Franni Junior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 39 |
Thank you Martie for your comments on my poem. I am honored. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Franni, and very descriptive. I could 'see' it all! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Even though this Kansan is color-blind, he appreciates the beauty of this poem... |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yellow has been my favorite color, since childhhood .... I love the way you describe it here ..... Wonderful piece, Franni  [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 04-23-2000).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
I really enjoyed this, Franni! I could FEEL the yellow... loved these lines, especially, "Yellow is subtle, Like in shafts of light After storm, In cream and tapioca pudding." Your talent is yellow, shining through on an Easter day! Post MORE!!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
When I saw your name, I was anxious to read your poem, but waited til a moment of silence after all the children and grandchildren have left, and now in this moment of silence I read your lovely poem, and it was well worth the wait. So nice to see you posting Love Liz |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Franni, this is beautiful and soothing. Thank you for writing this piece. netswan |
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Franni Junior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 39 |
Denise, thanks for your comments. I appreciate it. Mike, I am happy if I reached you in color. Thank you for your response. Hi Pepper, So happy to get your response. Last time I saw you , you were looking radiant in yellow. Doreen, Thank you for your comment. I appreciate your taking time to read it. Liz, I am honored that you saved a quiet time for me. I hope your Easter was special. netswan...You thank me for writing this. I thank you for reading this. There are so many postings on Passions. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Franni you've given the color such warmth and depth! |
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Franni Junior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 39 |
White Dove, Thank you reading my poem. Your input means a lot. Franni |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Franni - Yellow and sunshine are inseparable - and I loooooove sunshine... So why am I living in the tundra of New England??? Nice work, my friend.. Keep posting, OK??  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! |
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