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brandondinsmore
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 142
OKC, OK
0 posted 2000-04-23 12:25 PM

Lips

Just a kiss (sarc.)
My photosythesis
-I’m replenished with the sunshine
of your pleasantries-
Tongue.  Swallow up my chest
I’m aroused for you
I give up self-love
For your abundance.
Kiss me one more time…
(on my soul.)


3/17/00
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mariee66
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind
1 posted 2000-04-23 02:18 PM

I think you mean photosynthesis~
Anyway, interesting poem~
Marie~
hsystems
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 319
Murray, UT, USA
2 posted 2000-04-23 04:26 PM

brandondinsmore - very passionate and to-the-point.  Nice work!


Troy

 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm


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