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Kiss and Touch
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Kiss and Touch |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Kiss and touch. Silence creeps yonder. Movement with stroke. Fear strays more directly. Insistent motions and nocturnal frenzy. Perverse pleasure; human normalcy. Stop! Here comes the thinking… Here comes the sun And here I come, And here you come, And where do we go? Fear not, our direction, And enjoy it, and pleasure in it, For it comes but a-once, And leaves forever for another ‘once’… A canyon not filled with words Is unavoidable Fill it; fill it to the top, the climbing top And amaze yourself at its beauty, For it alone is grace, And those words are some sort of fire A fiery monument… So talk to me, And I feel awkward at silence, Because silence is so ‘golden’, And it bewilders me, So I ramble… Who goes there, and here, and everywhere? I know that I must know, For we need to know, To carry on, ?, ? |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
The sun is my most true compliment to HER. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Fear not, our direction, And enjoy it, and pleasure in it, For it comes but a-once, And leaves forever for another ‘once’… A canyon not filled with words Is unavoidable Fill it; fill it to the top, the climbing top And amaze yourself at its beauty, For it alone is grace, And those words are some sort of fire A fiery monument… ------------ wow...yes I would think she would be most complimented by this. This is a very well written strong poem. I love the imagery and metaphors. great work here...I will make it a point to look for more of your work. I would also like to thank you for your VERY kind replies to my work this weekend. I was most honored to get 2 reads on one poem.That doesnt happen very often (smile) THANK YOU! take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Welcome  Your thought to this piece is amazing and I have found myself finding more things about it I like as I re-read I often do this to make sure I haven't missed anything.... Thank you so much for sharing!! Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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