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brandondinsmore
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0 posted 2000-04-23 12:22 PM


If I died tonight in your arms
Would let me go?
Would you love me so?

If I told you I loved you
Would you love me too?
Would you love you too?

And I could die tonight in your arms
With my earthly life conquered
Because of you
Beautiful you…


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brandondinsmore
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since 1999-10-27
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1 posted 2000-04-24 01:11 PM


Yet again, the darkness is symbolic of the absence of HER, yet she is holding me, and dying in her arms, well, that would be dying in a beautiful shower of sunshine...ahhh...how serene.
netswan
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since 2000-03-28
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2 posted 2000-04-24 01:39 PM


Interesting reflections, Brandon

netswan

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