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Beyond Two |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Beyond Two We all ache to know light still we draw into darkness, discordant bookends never turning face to face. Comfort of a borrowed heart, brief moments of nirvana recalled as we sadly withdraw and turn away to sleep. Herculean in soft repose, watching grace fall from afar, end of the line for dignity, so I love you even more. That you show vulnerability when emotions are best hidden, demonstrating your faith, a sign of true substance. Beyond all rationale thinking, still drawn to someone or something, inaccessible, just out of contact beyond the number two. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
I like, I like, I like. You are very well at this writing thing we call poetry. Great vocabuulary, great intent, great execution. Are you in love? Great writing! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Good thoughts, good symbols, good words, good poem. *L* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
WOW! What words you use here, Corinne! Discordant book-ends never turning face to face.......that, my friend, is poetry  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Truly a beautiful piece of poetry. Wonderfully done, lady. Images playing upon the page. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you kindly,Brandon, Seymour, Balla"dear" and Marge! Oh, and Happy Easter! Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful writing, Corinne! Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I love the way you put this together--excellent writing!! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, this poem is beyond the number 10. As always such style you have my poet. Happy Easter to you. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Denise and Martie! Parker, thanks for the kind words, and Happy Easter to you! Corinne |
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