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The Greatest Gift
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The Greatest Gift |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The Greatest Gift ~*Marge Tindal*~ On a craggy hill in Calvary a thorny crown upon His head The King of Kings hung silent no scepter did He wield The gift from the Maker perfection in His sight The King of Kings hangs silent no other gift bears His light Symbolic offering complete of love Son of The Father sent with love The sign of greatest gifting One who knows no sin Giving life for others Cleansing from within Know ye now the sacrifice let not your heart know troubled day The King of Kings has given His life your sins now washed away Rejoice that you have known the greatest gift of sacrifice All else pales in comparison Give thanks and give it twice Once for The Father Once for the King of Kings Give thanks today for Eternal Life that this gifting brings Now He is risen The prophecy fulfilled with grace Now He is living Light of the world upon His face ~Glory be His Name~ |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
No doubt, you are a religious writer. I like your writng, but it seems that you are glorifying the act of writng more than the content of it. Overall, it is very good, though. I hope to read more of it. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very beautiful and fitting, Marge. Thank you..... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A wonderful poem, bless you. *L* |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Once again, an outstanding poem!! Your words are so deep and full of love....I will rejoice in the Lord, I will always rejoice in the Lord. Thank you for sharing this with us! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you for this reminder of what matters most, sweet Marge. Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Your sincerity is appreciated, my friend. Seymour~ Blessings sent back your way, my friend. ESP~ The words are from my heart - put there by my faith in Him. Corinne~ Glad you were uplifted by His message. Happy Easter to you all. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, beautiful message, Marge! Happy Easter! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, Denise~ It was a beautiful day for sure. Hugs to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Beautiful rememberance Marge and the perfect day to remember the pain as much as the promise. |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Thanks for the posting to remind everyone the true meaning of easter. Nice poem |
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PoohBear24 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 18Tampa, FL. |
oh I believe you have said it all Finish your beer--There are sober people in China! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Thank you, hon. LadyWeb~ Truly it was my pleasure to tell His story. Thank you for enjoying. Pooh~ His gift said it all for all of us. Thank you for liking. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Happy Easter to you Marge and glory be unto you Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
He is the greatest gift......and I think you are one of the great gifts of life for sharing your talent with us all..... A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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