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Dusk Till Dawn
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Dusk Till Dawn |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Dusk speak to me as twilight whispers goodbye for her light warmed my soul and removed the frown from my face her darker side You….. surround me with sounds from woodwind and strange feelings from a songbird whose echo throbs deeply, peacefully within my racing mind calming me soundly… suspending my consciousness till dawn Dark Angel 2000 What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Angel girl this was beautiful! suspending my consciousness till dawn I love it! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely....lovely....I like this one a lot dear..  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Angel, thanks so very much sweetie  ----------------- Sharon Thank you, so glad you liked it What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Your work is full of explicit imagery, I can see what you are feeling, wonderful work! David2 |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is a wonderful piece, Dark Angel A very serene picture Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Dark Angel! Very lovely! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I agree with all of the above...a singularly beautiful piece of writing. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ So beautiful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow!, this is fabulous..just beautiful! Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Angel~ This was lovley, the last stanza really got me Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Rebecca, so glad you loved it, thanks so much Angel ------------------ Thanks so very much Sharon ------------------ David, Thank you for your lovely reply ------------------ Elizabeth thank you ------------------ Thank you Denise ------------------ Balladeer, thank you Sir so very much ------------------ Eagle One, thank you! ------------------ thanks marge ------------------ Tracie, thank you so very much! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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