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Paradise echoes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Paradise echoes Paradise echoes, press a vice. Screening my Nazarene in glean. Ever winking in mild entice, In subtle scaling and obscene. I cannot weed desire out, It visits there in phantom dream. Where fantasies do come about, In willing slips and slides and seem. It dips between like dental floss. A motor in fail, falling apart. It drives old engines to chaos. From age and too many kick start. There seems no way to stop the drive And pretense is the sword of choice. Just so long as your still alive And have the substance of a voice. It is a battle few have won, Before the embers are undone. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
WOW!!!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  < !signature-->"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." on [This message has been edited by ESP (edited 04-23-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent poem, Sy. Always a pleasure to read you...  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I like your "sword of choice" Another exquisite piece of writing from the master Love Liz |
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Franni Junior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 39 |
This poem has such refreshing and strong images. I read it several times. It was packed with such wonderful lines and a great ending. Franni |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Your poems always have this magical mystery about them, Seymour. True joy to read them. Corinne |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderful read. Enjoyed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ESP, Always enjoy a big WOW. Poet deVine, Sweet excellent,thank you. Elizabeth, Always a pleasure to serve you. Love Sy Franni, a beautiful comment a million thanks. Corinne, You have quite a bit of magic youself. *L* Mike, Thank you for the wonderful. |
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