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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Do you know how much I love you? Do you know how much I care? Do you know just what it does to me when I see you standing there? Can you feel the pain I'm feeling when I look into your eyes? Cause you told me that you meant it when you said you'd never say good-bye Was it all just a game? Did I mean anything? Am I just another fool? Did you even care for me? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Janet, I owe this one to you. Thank you a hundred times over. All my love, Jeffrey [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 04-24-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Can you feel the pain I'm feeling when I look into your eyes? Cause you told me that you meant it when you said you'd never say good-bye -------------------- jeffery, this is emotional and honest... I am most complimented that you let my work inspire you...thank you. thank you also for all your encouragement to my work... I enjoy seeing all your replies in this forum...all your enthusiasim... I enjoy a man who enjoys poetry...and you are giddy with delight in here.(smile) perfect poem, take care kind sir, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Something I said? LOL. Quit thought proking sir....I hope JM doesn't go writing about make-up or anything next time!!! LOL Marina |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good poem Jeffrey....  |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
So many questions, and it's so hard to try and not ask them...I can feel your frustration in this...Argh! Very nice piece, I felt I was reading your heart... |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is great, Jeffrey~ I could feel this one~ Marie~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ About as open and honest as one could get ... beautiful questions. Hope there are some answers for you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very good, Jeffrey! Denise |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Jeffrey - very heartfelt, my friend! I hope it helped you to resolve this issue a little bit, and gain a measure of peace. I love you , man!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I want to thank you all for your kind word, however this is not an issue in my life. I am a happily married man with 2 wonderful children. Janet's post just brought back some memories and that is where this piece was hidden. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Sorry guys...I brought this back up for a friend whom is thinking of joining us here at passions. Any encouragement to them would be appreciated. Let's show them how close this "family" is, ok? All my love, Jeffrey |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Glad you brought it back up, Jeffrey... it's such a beautiful poem! I hope your friend decides to join Passions! I know it was one of the best decisions that I ever made! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Jeffrey I'm glad to hear you are happily married...so I know that you are not experiencing these feelings for something going on in your life right now. Thats what life is all about...happiness. All these questions reminded me of that old Elvis song....as he said down at the end of lonely street is the Hearbreak Hotel. These are questions we have all ask at some time in our lives. I enjoyed reading this poem...James |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
BTTP |
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Go0fYdUcK Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 28CA |
wow...dat was really touching Jeffrey...i could actually feel it..wowee.. *KhAnH-eLySe* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Jeffery, This was beautiful!!! I hope your friend joins us, a family can never get too big, for our hearts have so much to share!!  Beautiful words from a beautiful soul!! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
I hope your friend will join the Passions family and find friends here! This is a simply well expressed piece!  *Gee, now if I could just learn how to spell, I could quit editing my posts. LOL ~Sheri [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 04-24-2000).] |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Very nice, I was hesitant at first myself, < !signature-->but then The people here at passions welcomed me with open arms and enourged me to keep writing. So I just decided to take the plunge, come on in, and test the waters. What do you got to lose? 53 [This message has been edited by Lady Web (edited 04-24-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
BTTP |
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sweetchild Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 37 |
Jeff, GREAT poem. I haven't been through exaclty the same thing but the thought of it really scares me (maybe thats where a get a fear of becoming too attached?!?) Anywaz, great job, keep em coming. Oh yeh, and Jeff's friend- Join, you won't regret it, (what do you have to loose?) *erika* |
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