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~ Angels Are Romantic ~
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~ Angels Are Romantic ~ |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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~ Angels Are Romantic ~ by poetFemmeFatale April 22, 2000 Music filled the air as on the floor, the dancers danced - Elegant & graceful, onlookers quite entranced... Ladies in long gowns led by gentlemen with style - Having just arrived, I blended - watching for awhile... Romantically adaze I felt the magic in the air - Approached by one or two young men, alas, I didn't dare... Frozen there, was I my heart it trembled, as I stood - Longing to be on the floor, dancing if I could... Something held my feet ever fast there to the floor - Bewildered now - as fear took hold, I started for the door... Pushing through the crowd in flight - I didn't realize - You were waiting by the door, to stop me with your eyes... Handsomely you stood you weren't about to let me leave - You took my hand & pulled me near, and whispered softly, "breathe..." You led me to the floor we closed our eyes, began to sway - The only ones, it seemed out there, I felt so safe this way... My head against your chest with both your arms around me tight - Secure was I, within your warmth, we danced all through the night... Music oh so soft with you my angel, there I found - Pure love, as I had never known, our *sighs* the only sound... We danced as if on air hovering o'er the crowd below - You held me there so heavenly, and didn't let me go... Our feet not on the ground and yet, you didn't seem surprised - How lost I'd been, but now I'd found, myself there in your eyes...  Angels are romantic now having danced with one, I'm sure. Their arms are oh so strong, & their kisses, oh so pure... ~~~~~~~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful....reminds me of an old Fred Astaire/Ginger Rogers movie!!! Elegantly done.  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, This is oh so beautiful.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OOOOOOOHHHH MAAAAAAANNNNNNN DOES HE HAVE A BROTHER?????? nevermind...I'd just step on his toes. Beautiful poem my poetice pal... VERY beautiful... you dance divinely my dear. later-gen-gator jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Ok Gen. . . you been looking in my notebook? This was great. . . and I think that I have my top hat and tails back from the cleaners if you'd like to have one waltz. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
PoetFemme this was was wonderfully done -----you had me dancing boy, I hope that was a strong angel ---) netswan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Loved reading this..very interesting and romantic. James |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Girl, you've been holding back on us..lol Your work just keeps getting better and better. This one has legs. It moves, oh how it moves. All my love, Jeffrey |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
PdV - - *curtsies* So glad you stopped in to enjoy this one! Fred & GInger were a little before my time, but that "dancing on air" was the feeling I was going for! LOL I've seen some clips of them if it makes you feel better! hehehe Lost Dreamer, netswan, and James - - Thanks for reading and enjoying the magic with me! Wwoooo is it magic....  Janet - - I don't think he has a brother... Well, I'm not sure! BTW, you should SEE how I dance!  You'd be breaking out in a sweat girl! hehehe I get CRAZY!Sven - - Uh...the waltz. You'd definately have to teach me that one, and wear your steel-toed boots! Jeffrey - - This one has legs?? ROFL (blushing) Glad you uh....liked them? hehe To all of you who are humoring me of late with my romantic tales....thank you. I've acquired a sort of "angel" in my heart and mind, who inspires much of my works of late. Whenever I experience writer's block, I just think of "him", and write...What he gives me is most enchanting! LOL Thank you angel. He's my imaginery friend.... hehe |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Gen this was enchanting alright! Send that angel this way would ya |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Imaginary friend eh? Well, does this "friend" have a name? And as for the waltz. . . I think that you'd pick it up quite quickly!! -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
this is too beautiful to be on the second page..."move it on up!!" (i posted..look for it) |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
yet another beautiful distraction? I too have imaginings, but they never inspire as your muse does. Thank you for this one. |
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