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destiny smiles. . .
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destiny smiles. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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destiny smiles on those she loves from her lighthouse high above giving joy and giving peace and from sorrow, sweet release with a touch of her hand she gives blessing to all those who have come distressing with her voice she calms their fears and gives them strength to last many years smile on me destiny, send your warmth and light give me the strength to face the darkest night and when my trial is over and my race is run may your smile be the last thing i see when my time is done ------------------------------------------------------------------ < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 04-22-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Sven! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven, you've written destiny so real and warm...so illuminating, forgiving. This is full of beauty, my friend... ~ Claire |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i hope your destiny meets you at the juncture of forever and now |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
What a lovely read, Sven~ Marie~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Where do you come up with these?? You are starting to make the rest of us look bad! Marina |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Er..Sven...I'm confused- given your definition of the word...Me thinks to call you destiny for a bit!!!  You've truly been my strength...lovely poem too btw...Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Denise, glad that you liked Claire, I feel that destiny is real for all of us in some way, thank you my friend Doreen, thanks for your poem about destiny that I drew inspiration from for this. . . Marie, thank you so much Marina, where do I come up with these? I don't know. . . just off the top of my head! Devina, I am definitely NOT destiny! LOL. . . I'm just a writer. . . and I have all of you to thank for your warmth and encouragement. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ You make Destiny a lovelier word than I'd thought it to be. This is sooooooo pretty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Destiny has smiled upon me by letting me read this lovely poem!! This is truly beautiful, Sven!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, A lovely poem and don't worry destiny will be by your side till the end. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you again all. . . Marge, I just opened the dictionary and there it was. . . ESP, thank you so much. . . glad that you liked it. . . Sy, thanks. . . I know. . . and thanks for the comment.. . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, This is just lovely my friend, I think you have already been blessed with this peom it is just wonderful. Cerenity |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I'm starting to get jealous here...lol Beautiful poem sir. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Go0fYdUcK Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 28CA |
wow that is a beautiful image! *KhAnH-eLySe* |
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