navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #7 » Our Beautiful Stuff
Open Poetry #7
Post A Reply Post New Topic Our Beautiful Stuff Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014


0 posted 2000-04-22 10:11 PM


Our Beautiful Stuff

Mother's day brings childhood love
The birth of Christ is love from above
January first is the beginning of change
Your birthday develops a mortal strange
Remember freedom and their names
Scary faces playing games
Phone for roses on thirteen
Another saint wearing green
As we orbit the sun with our beautiful stuff
One Earth Day is not enough

(My first published poem ever hope you like)




[This message has been edited by insect (edited 04-22-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 insect - All Rights Reserved
Mike
Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

1 posted 2000-04-22 10:16 PM


Let my congratulate you on an excellent first post. Well done.
netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
2 posted 2000-04-22 10:21 PM


Insect, this is a wonderful first post
- thank you for excepting the challenge,
challenge well met.  

Welcome to Passions

netswan

Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-04-22 11:33 PM


Welcome to Passions,Insect! I look forward to reading more of your work. Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise

Parker
Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
ON
4 posted 2000-04-23 03:28 AM


insect, welcome to passions a very good first post brother.


Parker



[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 04-23-2000).]

insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

5 posted 2000-04-23 06:09 PM


Mike  
netswan  
dsnyder  
Haleyja  


Thanks for responding to my first post.

insect

AMaZing
Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 10

6 posted 2000-06-28 05:14 PM


What a beautiful poem for your first...

insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

7 posted 2000-06-28 05:43 PM


AMaZing…thank you , you are to kind
                    You are amazing by responding
                     in OPEN#7 Thanks again!LOL     

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #7 » Our Beautiful Stuff

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary