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I Will Never Write Again

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netswan
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0 posted 04-22-2000 09:56 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan


My tears squirt blue
my mistress chews my butt
and I can't write a thing

But, I do love tragic
romantic farewells like
Shakespeare brings

I must write my epitaph
before I fade away

I have roared with wit
at one time ----and now
must lay down and die,
but first my friend,
I must use my last ounce
of strength

And squirt you in the eye!

The Mighty Ink Pen


netswan
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mariee66
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1 posted 04-22-2000 10:06 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

LOL!!!
This is VERY Good!
Marie~
Meadowmuse
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2 posted 04-22-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Quite clever, netswan.  

~ Claire
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3 posted 04-22-2000 10:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Delightful!

Denise
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4 posted 04-24-2000 07:02 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Hehe... Remember the old "fountain pen's"?  We used to have refill cartridges for them... (I'm not old enough for the "real" inkwell stuff....
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5 posted 04-24-2000 07:10 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Very cute in deed  
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6 posted 04-24-2000 12:59 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Too cute - and a very belated Welcome to Passions from me...
brandondinsmore
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7 posted 04-24-2000 01:01 PM       View Profile for brandondinsmore   Email brandondinsmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brandondinsmore

Did I miss something!?  If I did, then that would explain why everyone is saying 'cute poem', and such; but this, if no humour is intended, is a very sad thing.  I truly hope that you find your writing strength once again, or, if not, some other means to express yourself...
rene
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8 posted 04-24-2000 01:05 PM       View Profile for rene   Email rene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rene

i don't think i quite understand but i enjoyed it anyway
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9 posted 04-24-2000 01:07 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

ok will adress both sentiments....it is sad and well written if it is a goodbye, it is humorous and well written if it is about an ink pen running dry...either way, you have added something positive to this forum so I am hoping it is not a goodbye (hugs)
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10 posted 04-24-2000 01:20 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

OMG, Teresa - you have outdone yourself, my friend - this is TOO funny!  I, too, chew on my pen's 'butts'...and I buy them by the 10-pack, because they "live" such short "lives"...I think it goes something like - one poem, two poem, three poem, epitaph...and then they "bite the dust," LOL!  So, before my current pen breathes its last, let me squirt you in the other eye...ROFLMAO!


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Martie
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11 posted 04-24-2000 01:46 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

If you put that pen in your pocket and then do a wash with said pen in pocket, you will find lots of blue clothes, I promise.
netswan
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12 posted 05-23-2000 02:30 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Wonderful people and all your comments and some of you with concerns.  This is the
mighty pen ---meant only in humor.
Thanks everyone.
OH Troy, my friend - since your pen got
me back in the other eye.  My other friends
call me "spot"  
Angelwings
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13 posted 05-23-2000 02:35 AM       View Profile for Angelwings   Email Angelwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelwings

It's quite amazing how we pass the time trying to break through that writers block.  Great way to express the trial.  Thanx for sharing.
netswan
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14 posted 05-23-2000 02:39 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

How very astute, Angelwings - thank you.
Was having a heck of a writer block night!

~netswan
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15 posted 05-23-2000 06:01 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

NetSwan~
Great big *giggles* coming from this corner !

Sort of the 'Rorschach' of writers block.

Loved it.
~*Marge*~



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Kit McCallum
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16 posted 05-23-2000 06:09 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Loved this ... you gave your pen quite a personality Netswan!  I enjoyed this!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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17 posted 05-23-2000 01:22 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Say it ain't so netswan, maybe you use a computer or typewriter instead of a fountain pen, I hate those things. We used to have to use them in school and I would come with my hands blue like a smurf.

I am glad that you are dealing with writers block in a tongue and cheek way. Really enjoyed this one.

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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

Small Black Flowers That Grow In The Sky

"You have your very own number
They dress your cage in its nature
Once you roared now you just grunt lame
Pace around pathetic pound games

Wanna get out won't miss you sensaround
To carry your own dead to swing your tyre tricks
Wanna get out here you're bred dead quick
For the outside,
The small black flowers that grow in the sky

They drag sticks along your walls
Harvest your ovaries dead mothers crawl
Here comes warden, Christ, temple, elder
Environment not yours you see through it all

Wanna get out won't miss you sensaround
To carry your own dead to swing your tyre tricks
Wanna get out here you're bred dead quick
For the outside,
The small black flowers that grow in the sky

Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

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18 posted 05-23-2000 01:28 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

tragedies i love em you should try pilot pens they are so smooth my personal favorie is the G-2 .07 mm but there are the p-500 and p-700 series as well as the v5's and the v7's I will use on occasion all fine pens and you can refill the g-2's o the poets pen is his sword!
ESP
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19 posted 05-23-2000 03:29 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Lol....this is cute and very funny too! I enjoyed greatly.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie
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