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CMGrimm
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0 posted 2000-04-22 06:51 PM


Can any of you help me....I'm stuck.....lol


Golden glowing
sunlit hair
each time I see her
I stop and I stare

At her eyes
at her mouth
at her beautiful face
When she comes near I can feel my heart race...


   Can someone kinda chime in from here.???

(me thinks me heart is fluttering too much to think...lol)


 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



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1 posted 2000-04-22 07:14 PM


Perfect hands
Full of grace
Movements making
My heart race.

How I love
To see her arms
I'm bedazzled
By her charms.

Long, sleek legs
Perfect shape
Makes me stare
With mouth agape.

Slender waist
And derriere
Hope she doesn't
See me stare!

All in all
She's the best
Did I mention
Perfect breasts?

Oh, this woman
Lights my fire
I am filled
With desire.

Thank you, Lord,
For this joy
You've made me
A happy boy!!!!!!!!!


Whew! Who is this girl? I wanna meet her!  

mariee66
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2 posted 2000-04-22 07:39 PM


ROFL!! at Balladeer's chiming...

My pulse rockets on
As I continue to stare
Fluid is her movement
Flowing in the air.

With a sweep of her hair
I am captivated, drawn
I must know her name
For I cannot go on.

With a breeze blowing
Ever so swift
I hear a faint whisper
Come from her lips.

Ok... you pick up from here  
Marie~  

netswan
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3 posted 2000-04-22 08:00 PM


temptress tiger
you are devine
my heart beats
so sublime

your breasts
your behind
your creamy neck
for you I pine

shining eyes
soft sweet dimple
I want you
Oh my God you have a pimple!

rreeaarr - hiss Meow -----LOL

netswan
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4 posted 2000-04-22 10:27 PM


Oh I forgot to mention - the shame
the tears in my eyes for being
negligent of such clever poets,
BALLADEER - Clever poem writing and the LOL's on your comment on your end.

MARIE - very lovely, I had a hard time
trying to write about a lovely woman
with the heated passion from the male's
eyes -----)

CMGRIMM great start of poem and a cool
challenge.

netswan

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5 posted 2000-04-22 10:36 PM


I think I've met this creature fair,
...a goddess with it all,
My sister kept her in her room,
...she's called a Barbie Doll.
The only problem with perfection,
...the same's true in real life,
Plastic smiles and plastic breasts,
...don't make for much a wife.

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6 posted 2000-04-22 11:41 PM


With just a wink
of her eye
Barbie captures
my surprise

I turn to Barbie
I kiss her lips
and then
in walks KEN !

*It's Mike's fault !

Very nice poem Chris, Balladeer's is precious, Mariee's adorable, NetSwan's amusing .... but Oh, Mike  
~*Marge*~




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netswan
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7 posted 2000-04-22 11:46 PM


haha Marge  - Cute
Let's blame Mikey --)

Did you get that new divorced
Barbie DOLL?
You know the one comes equiped
with all of Ken's accessories

-)

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8 posted 2000-04-23 12:04 PM


This is too comical...LOL!

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9 posted 2000-04-23 12:12 PM


Ken says "hey what's going on"
I knew at once something was wrong
But Barbie didn't care of course
she just looked at Ken and said "Hey we're divorced"


NEXT


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mariee66
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10 posted 2000-04-23 12:15 PM


Isn't it amazing what Jeffrey can come up with when being pressured to write???  

LOL!!

netswan
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11 posted 2000-04-23 02:05 AM


Yes Marie, I find Jeffrey a delight
and very very bright. Okay, I will try to
help solve this mess --)
Gee when CMGRimms gets back in here, he
will be ROtF --)

I find Mike very clever, too and also
a great poet. -- I just like to play along
to see what happnens next.

So in response to Jeffery's last line
I will take him on.

Ken's molded smile
as the door he did slam,
"Frankly my dear, I don't give
a damn!"


netswan  ------gosh, this is fun -)
who is next?

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12 posted 2000-04-23 02:10 AM


"As if i care too!" Barbie shouts back
Turning back at me with that disarming smile,
"Let's not care about that worthless toad,shall we?"
My heart flutters

LOL...this is so fun

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13 posted 2000-04-23 02:20 AM


It's not so much that I care
just what came between us,
Mike thinks I've got plastic breasts
Does Ken have a plastic ????

Love you ChrisG~
~*Barbie*~


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netswan
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14 posted 2000-04-23 03:17 AM


Rotflmao  LOL Kaile, yes it is
and Marge I must respond heheh

Oh that plastic
heart of his I can cure
come to my arms
my lovely dear

netswan   whew escaped!



tracie66
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15 posted 2000-04-23 09:08 AM


"Oh no" not into the arms of another
I thought Barbie you were my lover

Oh you've got it wrong, for Kens the one
He and I have much more fun

Ken will always be my sweet dear
So run along now and fetch our beer

  
Tracie~
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[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 04-23-2000).]

mariee66
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16 posted 2000-04-23 12:45 PM


This is great...all the responses!!

Fetch your beers?
Never! he says with a sneer...
Away he walks from she the traitor
Only to trip over her ?????

Sorry...I couldn't resist  

Marie~

Next

CMGrimm
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17 posted 2000-04-23 01:40 PM


OMG....this has worked out far far better than I could have ever hoped...and yes I am ROTF... you guys are simply amazing...please please don't stop...

thanks everyone

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



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18 posted 2000-04-23 01:55 PM


ChrisG~
You've been a wonderful sport to let
us play with what began as such a lovely
poem.

I can only plead a 'sugar-high'
Must be all that Easter candy !
Think the other gals were nibbling too.

*Okay, it appears
I'm up to bat ...
Hey, there Chris
What 'cha looking at ?

Come on fella
step up to the plate
Tell me what you're thinking
before it's too late.

~*Marge*~





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19 posted 2000-04-23 02:00 PM


Yeah, Chris...
Please add on to this master piece  

(I will confess--I have been eating candy--LOTS of it!)


[This message has been edited by mariee66 (edited 04-23-2000).]

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20 posted 2000-04-23 04:59 PM


Lol...I can't write anything good enough to continue this!! Thanks for the laughs though eveyone!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



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21 posted 2000-04-23 05:38 PM


When Ken had left, a sigh she breathed -
This Barbie, with the golden hair.
And, as her ample bosom heaved,
Her silken ringlets fluttered, there.
"To Ken," she spoke to CMGrimm,
"I fear I'll always plastic be.
He never cared to search my soul,
To get to know the 'real' me.
Yet, you, my dear, have seen beyond
These rounded breasts and firm behind.
And, so, I make this fond request -
Please be my Doll, if you don't mind!"


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22 posted 2000-04-23 09:26 PM


Wow, well done everyone!  This has
been great fun.  Troy and Tracie
thanks for starting in - this is fun.

Ken came storming in,
"Come on Barbie, my dear
we can work this out.
We have always been a pair!"


netswan

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23 posted 2000-04-24 02:01 AM


Barbie replies with tender cries

"A pair we may well have been
But I want more than this plastic scene"

"I want to be real and feel your touch
Tender hands are what I want so much"

Ken hangs head low and is about to leave
Until Barbie tugs upon his sleave

next please........  
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netswan
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24 posted 2000-04-24 04:12 AM


Rejected Eyes
turn 'round
with a glitter of hope
that is, til Barbie spoke

NEXT
cute tracie



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25 posted 2000-04-24 04:44 AM


"But look at me
Im plastic too
so why can't I
just lust for you?

I must admit
that I object
because you're not
atomically correct!"


(I know Im new here, but I wanted to get in on this one!)

 Finish your beer--There are sober people in China!

CMGrimm
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26 posted 2000-04-24 05:04 AM


Ken's eyes dropped down
far down below
"But Barbie dear,
I didn't know"

That such a thing
was what all you needed
Ken hit his knees
and with her he pleaded.

"I gave you a dream house
a car and a boat
and in turn you gave love
tenderness and hope."

"All I ever wanted,
was you to love me
Not to be looked down on
because I can't pee."

Barbie says "Ken I have
loved you all my life
Mattel gave me no choice
when they made me your wife.

But I've caught you with others
Like that young little stripper
and have you forgotten
your little fling with Skipper?

lol...sorry...hadda chime back in..

please continue..

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[This message has been edited by CMGrimm (edited 04-24-2000).]

netswan
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27 posted 2000-04-24 05:05 AM


Ken sputters,
"Not atomically correct,
surely you jest?
Lust? - You plastic doll,
Maybe we should not
be married at all!"

Ken turns his eyes
to Barbie's potential lover
"I think I should let you have her!"


Welcome to the Forum PoohBear --)
I am fairly new myself.
Clever addition to this one -)

netswan

CMGrimm
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28 posted 2000-04-24 05:11 AM


lol..sorry Netswan...I musta cut  you off there....I liked your version of the story better....

And thanks again everyone for the wonderful amouont of fun you've all had with this one.

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



netswan
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29 posted 2000-04-24 05:43 AM


NO NO Chris! - that has happened to a
few of us in here. Yours is very creative.
I could not for the life of me think
of the doll named Skipper -- I was thinking
oh, what fling could Ken have had? Hehehe
don't mind me, I raised three sons --)
And, I for one, never owned a Barbie in
my life -----Wanna shoot some hoops? Ex
tomboy here --)
netswan

"Barbie you forgave me
those flings - remember?"
Or am I, too, full with pee?"

Barbie quickly replied,

"Yes, you gave me a house,
a car, and a boat
and many pretty things
but that does not hide your
selfish flings!"


NEXT
netswan


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30 posted 2000-04-24 06:24 AM


Oops, I don't know how to edit - sigh.

the above should say

OR are you, too, full of pee?


sorry --)
netswan

CMGrimm
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31 posted 2000-04-24 09:43 AM


               LOL          
PoohBear24
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32 posted 2000-04-24 05:15 PM


Speaking of those petty gifts
the ones you say you bought...
How could you afford them all
when a job's not what you got?

 Finish your beer--There are sober people in China!

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33 posted 2000-04-24 06:21 PM


If I could have just one night in her arms
she would finally know all my charms.
I'd start with a lingering kiss right on her sexy lips.
If she moaned a little I'd even kiss her fingertips.
A few moments would be well spent on her silky neck
and if my tenderness has the right effect
we'll linger there til passion grows
What happens next...does anybody know?
James


netswan
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34 posted 2000-04-24 08:13 PM


LOL POOH and JAMES  ----

Barbie's heart goes thud
at the passionate declaration

While Ken stands speechless,
thinking, gosh she is just a doll
This shouldn't matter at all

Then his eyes turn green
in dangerous jealousy while
steaming about how he
paid for Barbie's things

NEXT

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35 posted 2000-04-24 08:22 PM


baby you're so fair
why dont we move over there
you can get close to me
my private parts, i'll let you see!

 *KhAnH-eLySe*

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36 posted 2000-04-24 08:23 PM


Then he storms and says
" I'll be back you know"
after an hour he comes back
and who else is with
why it's GI Joe

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37 posted 2000-04-24 08:27 PM


Ken came back and said
"my plastic is bigger than his!
GI JOE you are dead
Go suck on my fist!"

netswan
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38 posted 2000-04-24 08:33 PM


Alone for an hour
Barbie did flirt
Til in the door
Ken did burst


Next --------

tracie66
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39 posted 2000-04-25 01:30 AM



I knew it Barbie, it wouldn't take long
For you to slip GI your tongue

I saw you kiss him just now
Get out of my house you plastic cow

Don't forget to take GI joe with you as well
I hope your life with him turns out swell

not......

keep it going guys this is so much fun  
Tracie

netswan
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40 posted 2000-04-25 01:39 AM


"Oh, Ken!
Barbie called after him
I know that a kiss from Chris would
be mighty fine
But a kiss from a man in
uniform just dazzled my mind!"

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41 posted 2000-04-25 01:47 AM


"Go to hell, Barbie,
And dont come back!
I'll ripp up your dolly
And also its back!

I thought you only cheated with GI
but now some guy name CHRIS???
Why dont i just Die,
I know i wouldnt be missed!"

 *KhAnH-eLySe*

netswan
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42 posted 2000-04-25 02:03 AM


Barbies' eyes softened
"I've never seen you so mad."

Seeing her eyes turn sad
Ken did calm his reply,

"Barbie, jealousy is knew to me."
"Let's ask those two men to leave."


NEXT  

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43 posted 2000-04-25 02:08 AM


Barbie pondered for a moment,
Gee! I am so perfect, I can get any man,
I am plastic, I am blonde, I am shallow(hollow inside) I think I can! I think I can!

Yes,
So I don't need G.I. Joe or Ken,
What I need is SUPERMAN,


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44 posted 2000-04-25 02:11 AM


Ken says to GI Joe
I think it's time to break out the kryptonite

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45 posted 2000-04-25 08:27 AM


LMAO
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46 posted 2000-04-25 10:14 AM


From Barbie's own lips
came this soft plea for help
'I am only one woman
and even though I'm fine.
Where are you Wonder Woman ?
Too many men ... too many men ..
so little time !




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47 posted 2000-04-25 05:15 PM


So Barbie had a Party,
To smoothe the situation out,

A pool party without a doubt,
She invited Wonder Woman,Bionic woman,
Marilyn Monroe,

Brittney Spears, Marie Osmond,Twiggy,
The Pam Dawber doll from Mork and Mindy show,

There was Superman, Spiderman, Ken, G.I.Joe,
Pee Wee Herman Doll, and Zorro,

Next on the list was Donnie Osmond, Luke skywalker, Million Dollar Man,

Long Ranger, Tonto, All the wrestleing men,
Spice girls, Vanna White,...Elizabeth Taylor doll too,


A Romantic Heart
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48 posted 2000-04-25 05:55 PM


Elvis doll came ,
And entertained,
By singing Don't step on my blue shoes,

Kiss dolls was next to sing with I wanna Rock-n-roll,
They nearly stole the show,

Then there was Michael JacKson Doll,
Who did Billie Jean,

Made all the other dolls cry and scream,


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49 posted 2000-04-25 06:16 PM


I'm winging this, so bare with me~

Off to a corner Barbie went with a mate
Ken, GI Joe and Chris no longer her dates.
Sly was their approaching
To see Barbie's new hunk
Oh my gosh!  It's Donald Trump!



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50 posted 2000-04-25 06:27 PM


and in the midst of it all,
was Barbie and Ken.
whoever thought,
they'd be together again?

the other guy dolls...
they looked disappointed.
but this marriage was made in heaven,
and surely anointed.

the party was happenin',
and no one was mean.
until evil CHUCKY!,
showed up a the scene......

next!  

wow, this poem chain is truly impressive.
keep up the good work everyone! LOL




 sKiTtLeS~

netswan
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51 posted 2000-04-25 09:04 PM


Ken - did see Barbie
walk away
to whose arms?
Donald Trump
His heart went thump

Competing with these
plastic men was tough
But -- one with so
much money was
going to be rough

Before Ken could
get to Trump
Chucky pushed his way in

Ken quickly assessed
that Supeman was passed
out and headed to
remove the krytonite

netswan
NEXT

so much fun in here.

[This message has been edited by netswan (edited 04-26-2000).]

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52 posted 2000-04-26 05:44 AM


But before the night was over,
In came a masked man wearing a black cape,

Hey Barb, he said, sorry I am late,
Why it was no other than,

Batman...

Oh Ken was worried how could he compare,
So much muscle of a hero there,

For Batman had all these gadets and toys,
Ones for Barbies delight,

Ken was left pondering what to do,
How could he win this fight?

netswan
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53 posted 2000-04-26 05:52 AM


With Superman on his feet
again - and Chucky he did defeat
He glanced over at Barbie
not even acknowledging Ken

Batman -- looked around
with his billowing cape
"Sorry superman - my turn
to step in"

Barbie was all aflutter
her hollow heart did pound
all these handsome men around

Ken did take a brave
start to talk to these men
his marriage to defend
Then confused at what to
do ---Skipper sashayed in

next

[This message has been edited by netswan (edited 04-26-2000).]

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54 posted 2000-04-26 06:23 AM


Skipper walked in,
Everyone was astounded,
She was all grown up, everyones heart pounded,

She was more beautiful than Barbie,
Full of wisdom with a college degree,
,
Look beneath the skin people,
Beauty there is what you'll see,

Look deep within the heart,
Let's make all this fighting stop!
At that moment To Chris's surprise,

This was the girl, she had opened his eyes,
Magic was the moment,
Moment ment for these two,

Drawn by fate together from out of the blue,
For she was full, not shallow, like the others,

She respected herself by not haveing alot of lovers,

And her heart was so big,
She forgave ken of his sin,

Everyone was happy once again,

netswan
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55 posted 2000-04-26 07:10 AM


Barbie was upset
at this turn of events
Skipper had no right
to take away her spotlight

She still had some audience
from the male chauvenists
men without a lick of sense

Chris had eyes only for Skipper
Barbie wanted to Kick Her
Her plastic smile she left on
while a sexier outfit she did don

NEXT

Great Job Romantic heart --_)


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56 posted 2000-04-26 07:26 AM


Quit being so selfish,
Skipper did reply,

You have all these men,
And Chris did not catch your eye,

You can't have your cake and eat it too,
I have learnt many things by watching you,

You've had your life,
You are Kens wife,

So many careers you have done,
Now its my turn to live and have some fun,

So back off sis,
Before I get pissed,

Chris is my one and only,
Not no phoney baloney,

So move and let me have some room,
Watch this flower bloom,

netswan
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57 posted 2000-04-26 08:49 AM


Barbie, shocked
at her sister's talk
whirled to her room
the door she did lock

Skipper turned warm eyes on Chris
Her lips were pursed for a kiss

Chris could not believe his eyes
This intelligent woman could be mine
His arm wrapped around her tiny waist
pulling her lips up to his eager face


Next

mariee66
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58 posted 2000-04-26 01:30 PM


Entwined together
Their embrace did ignite
A passion too hot
Twas' not a pretty sight.

Melt Skipper did
In the arms of poor Chris
Left sobbing, wailing
Barbie took advantage of this!


NEXT

CMGrimm
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59 posted 2000-04-26 01:44 PM


OMG...you people are killing me....how in the world did this ever go this far...lol

thanks for all the participation...

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



CMGrimm
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60 posted 2000-04-26 01:47 PM


Chris pulled Skipper in
held her deep in his arms
"I'll never let you go dear,
never let you see harm."

He turned and looked at Barbie
"You shallow little witch...
Someone should turn you over a knee
and give your plastic hiney a switch."

He turned and looked at Skipper
her eyes ablaze with joy
He kissed her long with passion
and thanked God for his new toy...


lol..

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



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61 posted 2000-04-26 03:50 PM


Barbie felt the
cold, cold chill ...
and oh, boy
if looks could kill.

Just because it's
driving her crazy ...
these plastic boys
will be 'pushing up daisies'.

All of you plastic turkeys
can kiss my royal rear !
I want a REAL man
like Balladeer !





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mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind
62 posted 2000-04-26 04:08 PM


To Balladeer's house
Barbie did run
Looking for compassion
And of course--ADULT fun!

Balladeer did answer
And eyeing this chick
Turned on the charm
Ah, yes...he is so slick.

NEXT

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
63 posted 2000-04-26 07:59 PM


hey Barbie come to my love shack,
We can hang out here for a grovey snack,

Your a swell chick Balladeer did say,
Now lets cuddle together  the ADULT
games we shall play,

Out came the feathers, body paint and gel,
Handcuffs, whips, blindfolds,

Oh my Balladeer, This is too much for me
To hold,
Don't worry my dear, I have it all under control!!!

mariee66
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Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind
64 posted 2000-04-26 08:22 PM


Barbie was shocked...
"No, this is not what I wish!"
Throwing the toys aside
Balladeer did plant a kiss.

Sweeping her in his firm grasp
Letting his hand slid to touch her ???  

Couldn't resist again  

NEXT

CMGrimm
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65 posted 2000-04-26 09:05 PM


lmao.....Balladeer??....Whips?...Chains?....
Gel???....lmao...oh boy...where do you come up with this stuff?

please continue...

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



sKiTtLeS
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Posts 113
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66 posted 2000-04-26 10:49 PM


Balladeer did whimper,
"what is it my dear?,
isn't this the reason,
you came over here??".

next  

 sKiTtLeS~


[This message has been edited by sKiTtLeS (edited 04-26-2000).]

Balladeer
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67 posted 2000-04-26 10:59 PM


It's not my fault, your honor
Don't judge me like I'm foul
I didn't mean to do a thing
To that sweet Barbie doll.

My buddy Ken's the one to blame -
That...and my memory's failin'
When he said "Slip it in the barbie"
I forgot he was Australian!

mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind
68 posted 2000-04-26 11:12 PM


LMAO!

Ahh...Balladeer is joining in again  

Judge did just happen to favor
Our man Balladeer this day
For he caught sight of Barbie squealin'
Clinging to Balladeer's leg!


insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

69 posted 2000-04-26 11:43 PM


"Whore wants to help you finish"
I mean Barbie, the plastic danish
I would have to concur clinging to this leg of fur
This post would be your 69er,    


CMGrimm
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Posts 685
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70 posted 2000-04-27 01:16 AM


I don't know about u guys ... but I think this has gone on a little too long...lmao.

So at the end
of all of this
there is a moral
to be told.

I am not sure
yet what it is
but it sure seems
to have grown old.

I'd lke to thank
my dearest friends
from Passions
Poetry group

For adding
and adding
and adding some more
to help me spill the scoop.

So Chris ran off with Skipper,
and it turns out our Barbie's
a ... bore?..lol..
And we found out more about
Balladeer than we ever knew before...
(lol...that was a cute touch though)

And it seems dear poor Ken
and Superman, and Batman too
are gonna be spending this springtime alone
and learn to start over all new.

But what about our innocent victim here
young vibrant and hyper little chuck
does anyone know what happens to him...
does anyone give a ....lol......

(sorry...but I couldn't resist...
I'll change it if it offends anyone...)

Any way to all of you
I thank you for your help
but did this story really end
the way it truly felt?


lol...thanks everybody...

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
71 posted 2000-04-27 08:25 AM


I just wanted to say that I enjoyed the fun of this posting, all my comments were ONLY from MY imagination,
I know that Balladeer is a sweet soul, a perfect gentleman, and that he also has a great sense of humor, a great poet!!
IT is fun to joke around and pretend with such friends who can laugh with you and not take everything serious!!! We should do this more often as some form of therapy....THANKS  EVERYONE FOR making me laugh!!

mariee66
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind
72 posted 2000-04-27 09:41 AM


sniff...sniff...
the fun is ending...

This was great fun!!
Thanks Chris!
Marie~

CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
USA
73 posted 2000-04-27 03:23 PM


Thanks Romantic Heart and marie...we sure do need to try to do something like this a little more often....

lol....what great fun this has been.

thanks again everybody.

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



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