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Promise Me You'll Watch
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Promise Me You'll Watch |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, 
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“Promise me you’ll watch” Promise me you’ll watch , With eyes that are my own, And stand beside my spirit, So I will not be alone. You’ll be there in the mirror, Placing flowers in my hair, Making the moment perfect, Despite the happy tears. Promise me you’ll listen, When the music starts to play, Because everyday to heaven, I’ve prayed you’d see this day. A day that once brought questions, To a little girls fragile mind, If daddy forgets about me, Will I be left behind? Promise me you’ll hold my hand, As I walk into gods presence, To give my hand in marriage, And ask him for is blessings. Holding me in spirit, With a warmth all your own, Feeling all that I feel, And all I have ever known. Promise me you’ll walk, Down that cherished aisle, And give away your little girl, With my very own smile. A child in your image, Your image often seen, But promise me you’ll be here, And cherish what it means. Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever> Amber and Ellis forever and always |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
This is a very touching piece! |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Amber, this is cleverly written and quite a tear jerker. Thanks for sharing, netswan |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've brought tears with this one sis...I've always known that he wouldn't miss it for the world...On your special day, you'll have me on one side, and dad will be looking on from heaven...this was beautiful Ambs... I love you sis!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Amber This was so beautifully touching. I got tears falling down my face now as I type. I am sure you're father is very happy and looking down upon you as is my Mom. Matter of fact they're up there together..I'm sure  . Hope your wedding day is all you want full of happiness and love. Take care,AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh Amber...... This is just beautiful! *Need a tissue* Thank you for sharing with us..... |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
thank you all so much. I really have had to tell myself over and over that this is something he will see regardless of where he is. I know in my heart that if god lets angels see only the special that he know that they wouldnt have missed for the world, that i can rest assure he will be standing next to me. thank you all agian and tanya,of course you know exactley how i feel i love you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very touching, Amber. Very beautiful! Denise |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
You little Sneaky whachamacalit, Thought you'd get that puggy little noze by me in the night/day... what time is it anyway. Nice nice work again my poet/friend. Should I tell you again and again how I love the way you make living life flow into such devastating lines. I won't tell you... Maybe you won't find out, but I think I'm just a wee bit late. Somebody already did. Darn-it. Sincerly, very cute |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amber~ I've always known that the eyes of our hearts are there watching us in our moments of joy and there in tear-stained silence in our times of sorrow. He will be there with you at the alter with your loved ones on your special day. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Amber..! Not that it has any hiden meaning, But you said I was cute... and too, I'm surely "Lucky" and also, "I'm sure still watching..." like you said to do..." Soooooooooooo, you promised......... now, what's happened..? so did you..? gimmy, gimmy, gimmy, all the details. All My Best Wishes, you deserve it. (Lucky) Dale< !signature--> If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 05-02-2000).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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