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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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If I had blue feet That would be really neat!! I would never have to wear blue socks Which for some, would be quite a shock. They would look like I've been grape stomping Squishing, squashing, mashing, moshing Dancing round the barrel to a tarantella I would indeed be one unique fella!! So, don't be scared of me and my feet of blue They're really not that bad, let me tell you Now, if I can only paint them with stripes of white, I'd have a really, really cool pair of nikes!! ----------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 04-22-2000).] |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
LOL  Thanks for the laugh. Never quite thought about it that way. It's good to see a dream through your eyes. =) "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Sven how original and fun. ---LOL netswan |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sven, .... you're funny!  *Pinching those dimpled cheecks* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hey thanks you three. . . WhiteNite. . .keep looking, you'll see more netswan. . . thanks! How about green hands and purple legs? LOL Irie. . . thank you too. . . *ouch!* not so hard!! LOL ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is one of those poems that I sit here and think to myself.....What???? So tell me what was your insiration for this? Bad day at the laundromat??? LOL Marina |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I love the comments to your poem thus far...pretty funny! That was a good read, and a great laugh! Marie~ [This message has been edited by mariee66 (edited 04-23-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven one with a magical heart creates magical poetry, this is different but fun all the same!! A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, Marie, and Isis. . . thank you all, glad that you had a great laugh. . . just trying to stretch myself a little with this one. . . there may be more. . . keep looking for them!! ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lol....thanks for the just-before-I-go-to-bed laugh!!! This is great!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Who would of known it Sven, the humorous poet Very funny. You really gave me a good laugh. Thanks for the chuckle. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ESP and kitkat. . .yes indeed, Sven the humorist!! A new side of myself that may show more. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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PoohBear24 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 18Tampa, FL. |
Oh this is great, and my favorite color too. Great poem! Finish your beer--There are sober people in China! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven, I think you're "one unique fella" ...blue feet, green, or pink! Delightful whimsy, my friend.~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Pooh Bear, welcome. . . glad that you liked. Claire, thank you my friend. . . whimsy has always been one of my traits. . .perhaps I will share more. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Well blue feet could mean your pants are waaaaaaay to tight Very cute You have the touch my friend Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
That was way to funny, cool. 53 |
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