The why of why not (a response to responce)

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The why of why not (a response to responce)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-04-21 09:18 PM

The why of why not ( A response to response )

My love has baked a fantasy pie
Within the shell of why.
Covered it with a whipped cream top and
Served it up like aesop.

A dainty of forbidden fruit,
Taken with wine to boot.
Desensitizing reasons mind
A statement not unkind.

A bold adventure of why not
Pandora in one shot.
Thrown to the wind all sorts of play.
Without a thought of weigh.

Left alone in the inbetween.
To face the unforeseen.
Under the cover of amour
And all of its allure.

To all of this, I stand in awe,
So come kiss me once more.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2000-04-21 09:27 PM

Wow! This is getting romantic! What is this, Paradise Island?
I've got to attend to some matters, but I'll be back and post a response here,
Love ya
Liz

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-04-21 10:12 PM

Oh my, my, I sigh...
It's I that stand in awe...

Scrumptious!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2000-04-21 11:36 PM

Elizabeth,
Thank you for the quick response, I hope you enjoyed the poem. Love Sy

Serenity,
Thank you for the scrumptious, glad you enjoyed the poem. *L*

Sunshine

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4 posted 2000-04-22 09:25 AM

Well, back up to the top you go, so the rest of Passions Ladies may sigh... - and one question while I'm at it - do you take a special pill or something or are you just a true romantic at heart? Whatever, I think it's safe to say you leave us ladies breathless...

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

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California

5 posted 2000-04-22 09:33 AM

A little bit swayed were we, Sy? Excellent comeback.

Michael

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2000-04-22 04:06 PM

Sunshine, Thank you, I'm just a romantic at heart. *L*

Michael, Thank you for the excellent, I'm just having fun.

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