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Lonely Child Senryu
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Lonely Child Senryu |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Child Abuse Theme Senryu 5-7-5 A lonely child cries woe behind bewildered eyes ache caused by Daddy By Melissa Honeybee  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ This is so heartfelt. These poems tear at our hearts ... but then, they should. We can't keep them in the dark rooms they must all be told so people will 'hear' the cries of the children before it's too late. Thank you for sharing this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
heart-wrenching piece of work looking 4ward to read more haiku/senyru from you!  |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
This is very good, Melissa -- such heartfelt words in such a short poem. Very well done. netswan |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you for your replies, this was easier for me to write because I understand all too well how it feels to ache because of an abusive parent, and I wanted to contribute to the challenge. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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