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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2000-04-21 05:49 PM



Fatal Attraction
~~~


Fascinating worms
with their captivating squirms
attracting gamefish
~~~


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!




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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 2000-04-21 05:57 PM


You'd be surprised what a well placed captivating squirm might attract, Rex.

(on second thought, perhaps you mightn't)  

Cute poem!

~ Claire

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2 posted 2000-04-21 06:21 PM


lovely haiku...i esp like the title....it brings me in,anxious and eager to read your work....brilliant!
tracie66
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3 posted 2000-04-22 12:12 PM


Rex~
Wonderful title and the Haiku grand  
Tracie~

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Denise
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4 posted 2000-04-22 12:22 PM


Delightful, Rex! Thanks for the smiles!

Denise

mariee66
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5 posted 2000-04-22 01:40 AM


Delicious crawlers
Dancing and prancing on hook
Luring bigger game.

Well...I tried  
Good one, Rex!
Marie~

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6 posted 2000-04-22 01:45 AM


I sure could use a weekend of isolation out on the lake...  nothing but me, the worms, and the fish...  Thanx, Rex.


Michael

Rex Allen McCoy
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7 posted 2000-04-22 09:56 AM


Claire ... What ... don't leave us hanging ... tell us

kaile ... the title fits the haiku ... but the haiku doesn't fit ones expectations

Tracie~ ... you are very kind ... thankyou

Denise ... thanks for stopping in

mariee ... you should title and post this ... it's good!

Michael ... meet you there ... don't even care if I catch anything ... just like the quiet sound of waves lapping on the side of the boat, drifting on a gentle rolling breeze


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