Open Poetry #7 |
~ Fatal Attraction ~..........................................( Haiku ) |
Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Fatal Attraction ~~~ Fascinating worms with their captivating squirms attracting gamefish ~~~ I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
You'd be surprised what a well placed captivating squirm might attract, Rex. (on second thought, perhaps you mightn't) Cute poem! ~ Claire |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
lovely haiku...i esp like the title....it brings me in,anxious and eager to read your work....brilliant! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Rex~ Wonderful title and the Haiku grand Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Delightful, Rex! Thanks for the smiles! Denise |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Delicious crawlers Dancing and prancing on hook Luring bigger game. Well...I tried Good one, Rex! Marie~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I sure could use a weekend of isolation out on the lake... nothing but me, the worms, and the fish... Thanx, Rex. Michael |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Claire ... What ... don't leave us hanging ... tell us kaile ... the title fits the haiku ... but the haiku doesn't fit ones expectations Tracie~ ... you are very kind ... thankyou Denise ... thanks for stopping in mariee ... you should title and post this ... it's good! Michael ... meet you there ... don't even care if I catch anything ... just like the quiet sound of waves lapping on the side of the boat, drifting on a gentle rolling breeze |
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