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Go Leafs Go!!!..........Written by my young nephew.
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Go Leafs Go!!!..........Written by my young nephew. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Go Leafs Go!!!! Hurray! Hurray! The leafs score Unlike those Senators, who are a terrible bore Hurray! Hurray! The Maple Leafs win Unlike those Senators who are a bunch of has beens Hurray! Hurray! Cause Joseph rules Can't beat us because we are too cool Hurray! Hurray! The Senators lose To the Stanley Cup we will cruise! Matthew Crossley Apr. 21 2000 |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I liked it Matthew, very good! Marina |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Matthew - this is great! Keep writing, my young friend - you have talent! And, special thanks to "Aunt Marina" for sharing it with us!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Cool poem, Matthew! And YES! keep writing! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent young Matthew!! You have done very well with this poem. . . and I like the Senators too, but not as much as I like the Red Wings!!!  --------------------------------------------------------< !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 04-21-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Troy, Claire, and Sven, thanks for your compliments and I'll take your advice and keep on writing. Matthew |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Back to the top! Auntie Marina |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Very very good )Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Go Leafs Go !!!  Heh ...win or lose ... the Leafs RULE !!! and so does your poem Rex}>{{{{o> from London |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very good indeed !! Matthew. Definatley keep writing!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thanks everyone for your compliments. Matthew |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
It sounds like you're rubbing off on the guy, Marina. I like this one, reminds me of playing in teh leaves in the back yard as a kid..... but, I didn't even know what a senator was back then (politics in general still bore me today), nor the Stanley Cup. (Hockey on the other hand.... "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Yay! Hurray! For Matthew's poem! Hurrah! Yippee! It's great! Please write some more and post it here! Your poetry's first rate! |
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