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Flowers for you(A Love Senyru)

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kaile
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0 posted 04-21-2000 06:53 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for kaile

Flirting with your hair~
Face lit up like yellow sun~
Friendly gesture pleases
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I found this delightful...let's share it around a bit, shall we?  


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very pretty...
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In a word - beautiful!


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4 posted 04-21-2000 01:58 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

What a sweet love senyru! You have summed up flirting and love in three lines perfectly    Do share more with us!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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delightful reply,Meadowmuse

very pretty remark,Sunshine

in a word,hsystems:Thanx!

yes,Melissa,i will strive to write more  haiku and share them with you

have anyone noticed that every line of my senyru begins with the letter "F"?here' my ambition:To write 26 haiku/senyru,one for each letter of the alphabet
do wish me luck.... ")
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"Flirting with your hair"
Now does that mean you are touching her hair, or she is touching her hair??

I thought it's her flicking her hair, and giving a BRIGHT smile, to attract someone's attention. Am I right??

And yes, good luck!! 26 senryus?! That's a challenge!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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Wow, I have to look up what a senyru is now. Enjoyed, fr.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

 
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