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Corinne
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0 posted 04-20-2000 08:27 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corinne

Colors

Daylight turns golden as
we cross limits of time,
charging the air with
silent words sublime.

Encircling open fields,
do not hem us in,
kiss upon nape of neck,
let the sighs begin.

Sweet but never simple,
as grapes upon tongue,
words fall into poetry
in-tune we have sung.

Spooning to sleep,
beneath apple trees,
sun falling in sky
with embracing ease.

Colors of light I see,
reflected in your eyes,
sparking purity,
naked where we lie.

Nothing comes so easily
as something meant to be.

2000 CM Bailey


© Copyright 2000 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 04-20-2000 08:42 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is absolutely beautiful, Corinne!

Denise
Dawn Eclipse
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The Horsehead Nebula


2 posted 04-20-2000 08:43 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

That was a beautiful poem!  I enjoyed it very much, and I can't  wait to read more!

 "It is in our aloneness
that we recognize our oneness,
even as the single droplet of water
knows also that it is the sea."Daniel

*Cassie Roseen*


Martie
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3 posted 04-20-2000 08:49 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

So beautiful and romantic, Corinne.
bboog
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4 posted 04-21-2000 03:02 AM       View Profile for bboog   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit bboog's Home Page   View IP for bboog

Corinne,
  This is a nice poem that is a little confusing. In the first line it says, "daylight turns golden", which made me think that it was early morning. And then later I read, "sun falling in sky". I thought, what's going on?
  I think maybe you should start out with "Sunlight turns golden" as it is a little less vague and a reader wouldn't think that it was morning. Just thought you should know.
best regards,
bboog
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


5 posted 04-21-2000 11:14 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Beautiful poem!  
tracie66
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6 posted 04-21-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Corinne~
So colourful, a very lovley poem which I enjoyed very much    
Tracie~


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Anne Rooks

Corinne
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7 posted 04-21-2000 12:05 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Thank you Denise, Dawn Eclipse, Martie!

Bboog, the afternoon is golden as well, no?

Thanks Suthern and Tracie66!

Corinne
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 04-21-2000 07:30 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Corinne~

Oh, this is so pretty.
I could just picture the warm golden glow of the afternoon sun ... slowly casting her colors across the meadow ... reaching toward the sunset of lovers.

ABSOLUTELY beautiful, lady.
~*Marge*~




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Rex Allen McCoy
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9 posted 04-21-2000 07:58 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Corinne ... beautifully written ... and so easily read ... can't wait for the warmer days to lose myself in love and nature

Rex}>{{{{o>
Parker
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10 posted 04-21-2000 08:00 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Corinne, this is soo beautiful, I'm glad I dragged my sick sorry butt out of bed to read it again. Your words are the sweet nectar of passion fruit.

Parker    
RAM
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11 posted 04-28-2000 03:44 PM       View Profile for RAM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RAM

Adobe Tones

Golden moments paint the day,
blending now with then.
Silent moments clearly say
what is felt within

Fields of sweetness cradle us
in such free expanse.
Lips and neck and sighs progress
in this freshest dance

Peeling layers from our words,
joined in renewed song.
Sweet, the flesh beneath is heard -
intricate and strong.

Lying close in echoed curves -
mirrored, graceful trust.
Pulling comfort, now relearned,
drawn from nearing dusk.

Earthen peace, surrounding us,
matched within your eyes -
deep and open, virtuous,
safest port for mine.

Dance steps come so easily
when they trace what's meant to be.

  RAM  4/28/00
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12 posted 05-02-2004 09:06 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I enjoy your writing
 
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