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Slow Death of Infatuation

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Effigy
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since 04-11-2000
Posts 490
Just sitting at the computer


0 posted 04-20-2000 07:04 PM       View Profile for Effigy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Effigy

I want to be near you.
I want to be with you.
Want to be like you.
Want to be you.
'Cause I'm sick!
Being eaten up with the disease,
your sexuality infected me with.
I'm choking on the splinters,
of the cross you’re nailing me to.
Watch me as I rip apart my insides.
You’re staring as I lick my open wounds.
'Cause I'm sick!
Burned and blackened,
deteriorating in the deception of hope.
IT FEELS SO GOOD!
As you eat away at my cancer,
killing me from the inside out.
Your rapping my soul,
and I your thoughts.
You don't mind, if
I have your mind.
You think the same,
Don't you?
Yes! you need me,
just as bad as I need you.
When it fantasies come down,
and there is no one around,
no one to see,
none to hear,
we're one in the same.



 understanding is misunderstood

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Alicat
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since 05-23-99
Posts 4277
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1 posted 04-20-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Interesting message, and very dark...me likes.  Don't be shy about checking out the other forums here...personally, I think this one would fit nicely into the Dark Passions forum.  


Alicat
forne_marin
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since 04-13-2004
Posts 140
Spartanburg, South Carolina


2 posted 04-15-2004 11:58 PM       View Profile for forne_marin   Email forne_marin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit forne_marin's Home Page   View IP for forne_marin

WHOOOOOO!!! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! I have a few very chioce things to say about it, but they verge on obscene, so I'll be breif. "I want to be near you./I want to be with you./Want to be like you./'Cause I'm sick!"
Whoa man. Helluva line. This is one of the best of yours I've seen.
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