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0 posted 2000-04-20 04:35 PM


(Ok, this poem doesn't apply to me, as you can read in the reply thread, it's merely a tribute to abused children...)

Oh, my Heavenly Father
Watch over me tonight
Be with me as I go through
This terrible time of fright

Lead me to the still waters
Restorith my soul
I'm asking you, my Father
You alone have the control

Oh Lord, here he comes
Only You will know
Of the terror that I feel
Of every stinging blow

You're the only Father
That I have ever known
You alone can see
How his hate has grown

Oh, my Heavenly Father
If I die tonight
It will only mean freedom
From every night of fright

I can't wait to meet you, Father, face to face
You can pick the time, I already know the place

This is for all the children who seek a Heavenly Father instead of an earthly one...< !signature-->

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

[This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 04-20-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-04-20 04:42 PM


I think we have all felt with way at some point.  There is no worse emotion then fear and feeling helpless.  We don't always feel it or know it, but I believe He does see.  I also believe if you are still here.....you were meant to be a survivor!  Maybe even to help others.  And this poem does help LoveBug.  Thank you for sharing.

Marina

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2 posted 2000-04-20 04:45 PM


Thank you, Marina, but this poem doesn't apply to me, it's just a tribute to abused children. I'm lucky to have a very loving earthly father as well as a Heavenly One. But thanks for replying!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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3 posted 2000-04-20 04:49 PM


Prayer always the best medicine.  Nicely done!

Corinne

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4 posted 2000-04-20 04:58 PM


As I read this I couldn't help but remember all the times I prayed for God to take me home. My tears continue to fall even as I write this reply. Thank you for posting this piece and reminding us all that we still have a "Father"

All my love,
Jeffrey

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5 posted 2000-04-20 06:39 PM


Corrine: Yes, prayer is the best medicine. Thank you

Jeffrey: Yes, we all have a Heavenly Father, and if this poem helped remind you of that, I'm glad I posted it.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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6 posted 2000-04-20 06:44 PM


Abuse does different things to everyone I guess. The abuse I felt at the hands of my father helped push me towards atheist rather than religion. To each his own I guess. Nice poem.
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