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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 04-20-2000 02:17 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Never

Never did such succulence exude
From written word
Never has a sweeter song poured forth
From twittering bird
Never have more dulcet tunes danced
Round the willow tree
Never had a poet written words
For only me

Never again would calming sea spin fast
To giant swells
Never would clear water flow more brisk
From mountain wells
Never would the swallow fly more swiftly
Through the breeze
Never again would poetry quick
bring me to my knees


Never again would Milkey Way drift down
From skies above
And blanket me entirely with blissful
Warmth and love
Never would I drift again in
Heavenís sparkling sea
Nothing is more beautious than the
Verse he wrote for me

Elizabeth Santos

© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 04-20-2000 02:23 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Liz: You must be some lucky lady to have a verse written for you...want to share so I can join you?....Cause if it's anything like your verse I'd be on cloud 9, hmmmmm ... ok then cloud 8 cause cloud 9 is reserved for you..

HUSG
Denise
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2 posted 04-20-2000 02:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Elizabeth!

Denise
Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 04-20-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Rainbow,
I'd love to float on cloud 9 with you. I've got lots of things i'd love to talk to you about. Any chance you could hop on a cloud some day and come over here to the States? or am I asking for too much fun?
Love ya
HUSG
Liz

Denise, Thank you, angel. You are always here for us
Love ya lots
Liz
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


4 posted 04-20-2000 03:10 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

"Nevermore shall such words strike my heart
as those words he wrote for me."

How charming, how sweet, how downright romantic!  You're charmed, dear one!
JamesMichael
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5 posted 04-20-2000 03:12 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I enjoyed reading this beautiful descriptive poem.   James
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 04-20-2000 03:17 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sunshine,
Thank you for your charming and sweet response

James,
Thank you
I'm glad you enjoyed reading it

Liz
Meadowmuse
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7 posted 04-20-2000 03:42 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Liz, how lovely it must be. And what a lovely poem you've got here.

~ Claire
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 04-20-2000 04:04 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
There is one very lucky guy out there somewhere. Your poem is exquisite. Love Sy
LoveBug
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9 posted 04-20-2000 04:22 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Liz, it must have been some poem to inspire this! Good job.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 04-20-2000 05:07 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Claire,
Thank you, dear, for your comments

Sy, I am the lucky one

Lovebug, Thank you for you response and for your inspiration

Love
Liz
dhuron
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11 posted 04-20-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

It is one of the best feelings, when someone gifts us with something from the heart.  Glad you received such a Powerful Gift. Wonderful Poem.


Daniel
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 04-20-2000 08:13 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Daniel,
Thank you so much for your comments

Liz
Martie
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13 posted 04-20-2000 08:20 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Never say never when
it comes to poetry
for a poet never runs out
of poetic magesty
and one poem so perfect
that it brings you to your knees
just means another one  
is waiting you to please.

What a beauiful poem you have written, Liz---so romantic and lovely.
Balladeer
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14 posted 04-20-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is both beautiful and mysterious, Liz....an exciting combination.
Irish Rose
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15 posted 04-21-2000 12:07 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

this is one to read and read
because it is so beautiful

 Kathleen

Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 04-21-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Martie,
Thanks for the little verse. I think you are right

Michael,
Your words mean a lot. Thank you

Kathleen,
And I will read mine over and over
Thank you

Liz
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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17 posted 04-21-2000 04:05 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Exquisite poem!

You have gathered all my deepest emotions about my husband's writings about me, and carefully tucked them into a picnic basket for us to carry out to the woodlands and enjoy together.


 The spiritual wind that keeps survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope for the world ... R.J.G.
Pepper
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18 posted 04-21-2000 08:21 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

'Never' better, Liz ....
Love this piece ....
Elizabeth Santos
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19 posted 04-21-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Rosemary
Proud to be part of your basket
Have a fun picnic!
Love
Liz

Pepper,
Never better than to hear
You are doing well, my dear
Now you can come over here
To visit me some time this year!
Love
Liz
tracie66
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20 posted 04-21-2000 11:08 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Elizabeth~
You are so lucky as never has this happened to me.  
Great poem.
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

ESP
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since 01-25-2000
Posts 2574
Floating gently on a cloud....


21 posted 04-26-2000 09:02 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

*sigh*...wonderful, Liz...in my opinion this is superb!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
lucky
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22 posted 04-27-2000 05:46 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

I'm sorry,

Rosemary had to bring this to my attention. Sure am glad, there's so much here to keep up on and I thought to say everything everybody else has already said... Lis your truly wonderful and you can know that and yours are on our prayer list. May God always bless.

Love in Christ Always, Dale
passing shadows
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*big smile*
 
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