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Casting Flowers (A Sonnet) (Revised a little bit)

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Denise
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25 posted 05-12-2000 09:00 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Gloria, Gloria (hehehe), Kess and Nan for reading and for your kind comments. They are appreciated!  

Denise
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26 posted 05-12-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Denise~
How did I ever miss this little beauty?
Nobody does a sonnet better than you.

I'm always reminded of -

'Blue bells, cockleshells
sonnets all in a row ..
Denise is quite the 'sonnetier'
that's how her garden grows.  

Love ya, gal.
~*Marge*~


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ashley cain
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27 posted 05-12-2000 10:21 PM       View Profile for ashley cain   Email ashley cain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ashley cain

That was so beautiful.  I think everyone has experienced a death, a heartbreak, or some other tragedy in their lives. Although, no one could describe it as eloquent as that.
netswan
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28 posted 05-13-2000 02:44 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Denise - this is wonderful sonnet.


I am very glad I stopped in to read it

netswan
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29 posted 05-13-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Marge, Ashley and Teresa for your wonderful replies!  

Denise
Kit McCallum
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30 posted 05-13-2000 12:07 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This is a wonderful sonnet Denise. I've bookmarked Nan's instruction page, and will have to have a read-through to refresh my memory. I haven't tackled one since high school (now I'm feeling much too old)! You've inspired me to give it a go!  Lovely work.

Best wishes,
/Kit
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31 posted 05-14-2000 09:42 AM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Your thoughts expressed with eloquence divine
with style that does out-shine such works of mine .
Doc
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32 posted 05-14-2000 10:36 AM       View Profile for Kellsue   Email Kellsue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellsue

Denise ~ this was beautiful...it's inspired me to learn once again how to write a sonnet...I loved this.

~Kelly


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Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill


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33 posted 05-14-2000 03:24 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Kit, Dr.Moose and Kelly for reading and for your lovely comments!  

Denise
doreen peri
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34 posted 05-14-2000 03:37 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Denise... this is absolutely lovely... an awesome tribute in well crafted verse... excellent!!!!
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35 posted 05-15-2000 02:04 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Doreen, I'm glad you enjoyed it!  

Denise
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36 posted 05-15-2000 02:42 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

nice imagery here....
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Thank you, Beki!  

Denise
 
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