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Sweet Poison |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Poison, sweet, flows in vein swore I'd not go there again... sorrows' cries mortal sighs all weakness left but to explain on the morrow submerged portal murky depth still to explain. Wantoness Indignity Ruthlessly brought to my knees haunted words write poetry tears of gods fill salty sea to wonder what's to come of me... I beg you pray serenity. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow! netswan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you beg divinely my sweet... this is EXCELLENT girl!! love the rhyme flow and pace... you and your muse have been cranking out the poems ... and kicking some butt too (SMILE) very nice work here sweet serenity kiss kiss jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
The pain in this flows into it's own salty sea of tears. Achingly exquisite, serenity. Michael |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
OK ... who threw sand in my eye ? WOW  Rex}>{{{{o> |
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PeterPeter Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 30British, London |
Serenity Indeed, I like it, but? wait your reply PeterPeter |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've been painfully thourough with this one love...my turn to blow my nose on my sleeve?  Big hugs sis...Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
netswan & Rex Allen---I stand "wowed" by your "wows"--(I really, really, LIKE that word!) Thank you. Michael--thank you my friend and beloved saint. Me humble. Janet Marie--thanks m'twin, the 'feeler of my pain...'kiss kiss back atchya. Devina--M'sis--financial tip for all--buy stock in tissues--(This "sleeve" thing is getting gross..." ) Hugs. PeterPeter--not sure what the question was... The poem? I don't like to explain too much..suffice to say that I read alot of mythology, and have an obsession with Jungian archetype. Hope that helps.--if it's my pen name that has you confused--take a number...lol. No, Serenity is not a description...I took my name from the timeless "Serenity Prayer..." I'd say it was my favorite prayer-- but I must confess that my favorite is whichever prayer has been most recently answered to my favor... Thanks to all--now back to the show... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Another poisoned kiss. Sweet! Mike |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
beautifully haunting Kathleen |
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