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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 2000-04-19 11:34 PM


Hearts afire
    strong desire
    to admire
What'll transpire

Lover's leap
    passion reap
    bodies heap
Nothing cheap

Quenched thirst
    lips pursed
    want first
Wounds nursed

Needs exchanged
    none complained
    mind unchained
Your detained

Souls merged
    pain purged
    lives converged
Hope resurged


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-04-20 02:24 AM


Two words...Okay.  But I like to have the last word...excellent!
netswan
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2 posted 2000-04-20 02:34 AM


Wonderful LOne Wolf, Great two words!

Loved this poem!
netswan

and, hey, you called me on icq, and I answered you, but you sit on my list
of waiting for acceptance ??

A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2000-04-20 02:55 AM


This was Great Lone!! WOW! hats off to You!!!
Cerenity
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4 posted 2000-04-20 09:43 AM


Hi Lone Wolf,

I really liked this one, great job, enjoyed.

Cerenity

dhuron
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5 posted 2000-04-20 05:14 PM


Great Poem here, enjoyed reading
hsystems
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6 posted 2000-04-20 06:24 PM


Excellent, LoneWolf!  You said a mouthful with those "two words."


Troy

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Danny Holloway
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7 posted 2000-04-20 06:28 PM


Those two words said it all.  Now that's expression!
Nice writing.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.



EagleOne
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8 posted 2000-04-20 07:18 PM


I love this! Ecxcellent work!!

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien

Ella
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9 posted 2000-04-20 08:41 PM


Wow,

Lone wolf you have out done yourself here! This is EXCELLENT!!!!! I loved it. Every single last word of it. Two Words. Eloquently beautiful!

Ella

Lone Wolf
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10 posted 2000-04-20 09:58 PM


serenity.....you got it!!  The last word...thanks!!

netswan....thank you.  Happy you liked it.  You are on my waiting list for ICQ too.  Will try again, okay??

Romantic Heart....thanks, my friend.  High compliment!!!  Just came to me.  

Cerenity_1....thank you!!!  And Hi to you!!!  

daniel...thanks!!!

Troy...that was my intent, my friend.  Thank you, I try!!!     (just for you!!)

Danny....thanks.  It is the little things that count as they say....

Eagle one...wow and I am happy to have touched so many people with this one.  

Ella....how am I gonna top that!!!  LOL.  Thank you very much for the kind words.  



 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Butterflies_dont_cry
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11 posted 2000-04-20 11:58 PM


This is excellent L.W.!!!  You put alot of effort into this, I'm amazed by the flow and the feelings evoked.  Thank you so much for sharing this!


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


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12 posted 2000-04-21 07:46 PM


I like !

Lone Wolf
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13 posted 2000-04-23 08:48 PM


Butterflies....thank you and yes, I did.  Sometimes you can an awful lot with just a few words.  You are welcome for sharing!!!  

Marge....thanks!!!!!  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Aimster
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14 posted 2000-04-23 09:26 PM


~LW

I stand amazed with the others. this was an awesome and inspirational piece of work. lovely job you have done here full of so much with those two words. excellent!

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Lone Wolf
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15 posted 2000-04-23 10:30 PM


Aimster....Thank you!!!  Glad to inspire!!  
I was amazed at the responses I received on this one.  Perhaps there are more where this came from!!  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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