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I Can't Hear You
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I Can't Hear You |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Listen do you hear me in the music of the song Listen are you waiting you must teach me to be strong listen to the laughter in your heartbeat I belong wait now can’t you hear me you must dance me you must stay hold me will you touch me I can feel you slip away wait now there is time yet let me love you one more day You say I am wind now I can’t hear you blow my way. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A beautiful poem,Martie. It really touched me. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I am enjoying your new styles... well written my friend... |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Such pretty words to grace my screen. Thanks Martie "The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Ah Martie...what to do when you can feel it all slipping away in the wind...so sad, so well written... ~ Claire |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Martie~ How lovely are your thoughts. 'listen to the laughter in your heartbeat I belong' Total and complete with love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
DEEPLY impressed here. Beautiful style, beautiful words........ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LoveBug--Hi, thank you for reading and your sweet reply Mike--I'm glad you enjoyed WhiteNite--What a nice thing to say Claire--I thought you would understand Marge--How lovely are your replies! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very touching, Martie, and very beautifully done! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Martie, This is wonderful! Pretty soon you'll be writing villanelles! I also loved your moon poem. It is a gem Liz |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
My hearts withers within me as I read this. I have been there, but I could not find the words as you have here. Aching pain in beautiful verse, with a magnificent title. |
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