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Child Abuse (Child Abuse Month & Acrostic Alliteration Challenge 2in1) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I don't know if I even did this correct, but thought I could do two challenges at once. Hope its meaningful. Child Abuse Child crying, caveat carnality Habituated hurting, Hushed Idle Inaction, Ignominious illusion Lamb lost, Love lethargic lifeless Darlings Damned, defiled defenseless Abuse allowance, adulterated act Beloved betrayal, Bane bearable blemish Unfeeling unclean, unvoiced ululation unending Scarred silhouette, stolen sweetness suicidal Emotional eidolon ejected, Elan elation embark James Parker Haley April 19, 2000 [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 04-19-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very meaninful and perfect Parker... your compassionate heart is showing, (again) *smile*... great job on both challeges...my, you are most inspired of late...and always for a good cause... take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A beautiful and touching piece. Good work! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
very perfect, very touching, boy are you a whiz with that dictionary or what?....no really great work  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
WOW! James, is a wonderful 2 in 1 poem. It takes great poetic talent to make this flow so easily and still have a very strong meaning. One of your best. You know how much this cause means to me, so thank you for contributing your talents to it. When we stand together, we are strong. Thank you. Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 04-19-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thank you all for your replies, it was difficult and and worthwhile to write. Parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Such a wonderful response needs to be at the top. Marina |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Parker, All that work that you did on this piece, is worth every effort you put into it and more. This was a fantastic read. Thanks for this. And, a challenge - well met, again. netswan |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Parker, This was very well done!! Your talent does not cease to amaze me, very powerful to behold, thank you for sharing this.Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, thank you again, and for the challenge, but I don't recommend doing the Acrostic Alliteration stuff, nightmare time, when I started, I was thinking of being a real smart-ass and doing it in a strict Haiku format... that idea soon got tossed out the window after the first line. netswan, thank you, if it wasn't for the child abuse challenge I would have given up on the alliteration stuff, too much work. Butterflies, your always too kind in your comments to me. thank you again. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wonderful, parker. corinne |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You?....a smart- ass. I'm shocked!!!! Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 04-20-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
wow Parker this was amazeing!!! not the suject matter...the format!!! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, wonderful of you to say...  Marina, well I was going to try. ARH, thank you very much. Parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
back with the rest with thanks .... Marina |
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