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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Chained this soul imprisoned , captured locked away by chains of a former time not young but old…. and living this period of existence lingering on old times, memories, ancient hills searching for the place it longs to be this heart a searchlight beaming bouncing hopelessly towards the pathway of my life the direction where growth, and change become different… it becomes me unchained Dark Angel 2000 What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Richter_9 Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 41Whereever I happen to be at the time |
Oh to feel "unchained". A wonderful feeling that would be. I, too, am bound by memory it seems. Love this poem Rich |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel, Good thoughts, good words, good poem. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Absolutely wonderful. The thoughts are so hopeful. Such a pleasure to read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well dang it all girl, why didn't ya just tell me ya needed the key? I'd have given it to ya.  Just teasing, great writing, keep bouncing  <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind, Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, "What Would Jesus Do?" |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ah, being unchained is truly a wonderful thing...well written, flows exellently, and a lovely message of hope. I enjoyed this a lot! *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You too, huh? Or then you wrote this for me...very, very nice...gave my heart the words to speak...much much gratitude... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
There will come a time when we all can break our chains....my time is coming soon.. wonderfully written.. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Dark Angel~ This was written superbly~ Marie~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent as always DA. . . the chains must be broken if we are to truly live. . . Wonderful words, my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all so very much for you lovely and sweet replies. I do appreciate them all What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"Where growth and change become different"... Great line. Great poem. I find myself stuck in the past way too often, also. Michael |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dark Angel, Loosing the chains of the heart is always our aim but some times the locks become stubbornly stuck until the time is right and then it happens the moment is upon you and you look around and life did change in a turn of a key. I am very happy you found your key. Cerenity |
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