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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Chocoholic Monster Crystal sands flowing within realms of time Mirrored reflection on wall hints of priorities Parading age floats while becoming lost in past Castles of beaming light surround ageless wonders Scale of resistance plays tiddle winks in my mind Metabolism train slows at depot station pounds Chained motivation held prisoner by appetite Highway Sneakers replaced by swivel office chair Trickle down heredity frosted chocoholic monster sweetened mind laughs gleefully while crying inside Diet diseased society destined for failing plans Ratio binding results no match for building willpower |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I am soooo glad I am not a chocolate freak! I like it with peanut butter, but that's it. LOL I hear about folks who call themselves chocoholics, and I do not envy them, as I know it would be the death of me!  Great read there girl! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ Thank you for this reminder of my sister. Nothing better than a box of See's Candy ... dark chocolate. Oh, Yummmmmmmmm ! Very deliciously done.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well, my mind was off the box of chocolates sitting on top of the refrigerator until I read this! Very well written, Gloria! Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lost Dreamer, I was scaning through the poems and came across my nic name Chocoholic and I guess monster fits me too, but I am a picky chocolate eater, has to be certain ones like snickers, score, heath, and so on,,,,,, any way this was a wonderful poem my dear, Cerenity |
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