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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2000-04-19 06:28 AM


Now I yearn to waken you
after I've
loved you to sleep...
How is that you dare
lay bare
angel's wings upon my keep?

You--the magic to enthrall--
smart-ass
seems to know it all--
visual of innocence...
I have known
no other since...
and no other can compare...
frigid breath to frigid air---
Masters I have known, aware,
Not before, not once, I swear,
have I ever stood this bare.

Porceline--you've found in me--
butterfly
of broken wing
high notes sung,
weave silken string...
the worm in me--
   cocooned--
       a queen---
Monarch, in her majesty,
It seems to be such simple thing---
open heart-..eternity,
open soul to your discreet...
I'll be the ground beneath your feet
and all the sweetness
you might seek.
I will be your moon-lit sky.
I will be your answer why.
Cook you soup and buy you ties...
I will be your precious lie...

If only gods were not so wise--
I'd tell my soul
to Truth, "ye lie..."

Your breath...
an echo of my sighs....



[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 04-19-2000).]

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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 2000-04-19 06:58 AM


Wow, serenity.  When you fly, you fly high.  This is wicked!!! and I mean that in a good way.  Cut's to the core.  Loved it.


Michael

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-04-19 10:14 AM


Porceline--you've found in me--
butterfly
of broken wing
high notes sung,
weave silken string...
the worm in me--
   cocooned--
       a queen---
Monarch, in her majesty,
It seems to be such simple thing---
open heart-..eternity,
open soul to your discreet...
I'll be the ground beneath your feet
and all the sweetness
you might seek.
I will be your moon-lit sky.
I will be your answer why.
Cook you soup and buy you ties...
I will be your precious lie...

If only gods were not so wise--
I'd tell my soul
to Truth, "ye lie..."

Your breath...
an echo of my sighs....
----------------
serenity....wow...girl this one is awesome...
I just wanna kiss your muse for this one *S*
love the imagery...
and the honesty of your emotions.
perfection...you are  
love ya sweets
jm



 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
3 posted 2000-04-19 01:16 PM


Girl, let me tell you - I can relate!!  Been there, and felt like that!  Makes you want to kick him right out of the bed!  But then, he's such a good lover, you don't!  ROFL.....Wicked indeed!  LOL
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