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Souls Aflame
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Souls Aflame |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Temptation Seduction Possession Passion Desire, and surrender wrapped within captured embrace Unrelenting and forbidden-- burning fever pray release shiver aware this haze of dream that meanders wandering magic clouds beauty within but seen by spirit eye-- cannot believe that this is I-- heart on tap-- pouring pages from my soul-- poke and prod-- arousing spark stirring ash souls aflame. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow Serenity - this is very good - had me moving along there with all that clever word action! netswan |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Quite clever! I loved the rushed feeling of this.. whisked me right down a path of emotions!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
whew...I think I scorched something on my way down that one...  wow serenity...hot stuff here perfect presentation... very well written your muse is smokin *S* later sweet-gator jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Richter_9 Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 41Whereever I happen to be at the time |
Very "alive" poem, serenity. Passion filled and stirring. Rich |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Interesting, I enjoyed the read. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
netswan--glad to get you moving....thanks for reading! Christopher--big smiles and a hug back atchya JM--er-just a sec--had to adjust the cushion on this chair...thought ya might enjoy this one..(I certainly did...)giggles. Love back atchya! Rich--I do admire your work as well. Thanks. Seymour--Thanks for dropping in again... your name is always a welcome sight. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Serenity, I have to agree with Janet Marie on this one my dear you are still SMOKING, I love using all of those words together it funs, very much enjoyed, Cerenity |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You sizzle, serenity. This one's on fire!!! Michael |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I know it wasn't me that inspired this work of art ... at best I inspire but a sneeze  Rex}>{{{{o> |
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