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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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kaleidoscope Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 38 |
Beautiful poem, so very sad. I am sorry. The last drop holds so much pain. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
me too. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lucky, this was done very well. So touching and painful Thanks for sharing, netswan |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Man - what power lies in the word... Awesome piece my friend. "soirée eyes laconic with blindness " What a line...  Michael |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is grief most poignant, honey. You put the haunting sorrows of your heart into such meticulously chosen words. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I am touched by your words. |
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