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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2000-04-17 05:52 PM


Strange what they think
machinery running
May yet be the link
to what we're becoming

On impulse to re-act
invariably
Are we part of the circuit
that we want to be ?

He asks with a grin
as the wheels keep spinning
If this isn't a battle
how come we're not winning ?

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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-04-18 10:30 AM


Interesting thought here.  
Nan
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2 posted 2000-04-18 12:15 PM


Hey, Moose - I see you spinning your wheels here... You want me to move you over to OP#7?... I can give you a push if you'd like..hehe..
hsystems
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3 posted 2000-04-18 12:48 PM


Doc Moose - this poses a very provocative question.  In this age of technology, is mankind getting "lost in the shuffle?"  Excellent writing!

  
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redheart angrybraids
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4 posted 2000-04-18 04:58 PM


thankful for your thought provoking words.
truly.
kindly,
redheart angrybraids

Nan
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5 posted 2000-04-19 12:52 PM


Push..... Shove..... Bump.......
Denise
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6 posted 2000-04-20 03:19 PM


Very good, Dr. Moose!

Denise

Cerenity
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7 posted 2000-04-21 09:55 PM


Hi Dr. Moose1

Yes very thought provoking question I like this poem, and will have to give this question more thought because my circuits are blown right know.

thank you for the read,

Cerenity

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